Okay, so I started writing a WWII historical fiction novel. I need to know what people think. I have an idea for switching some stuff around, but I need to know what people think of it so far. Thank you!!!
Chapter 1
The wrinkles on the woman’s face showed more than they had in years. It was her ninety-fifth birthday, but her bright blue eyes shown just as bright as they had sixty years ago.
She sighed, touching her white hair. Memories of the full, blond locks engulfed her mind, and suddenly, she missed the past, the terrible, dark, heartbreaking past.
“Grammy?” The old door creaked as the woman’s seventeen year old granddaughter opened the door.
Grammy turned, her eyes swiping over her son’s beautiful daughter. It was like a reflection of Grammy’s past features. Her granddaughter’s blond hair was swept up into a bun and her blue eyes shone like the deep blue sea.
“Yes Liesle?” Grammy asked, trapped in memories.
“Grammy, I’ve told you a thousand times, call me Lisa.” Liesle sighed, sitting on the soft bed, and looking at her Grammy as Grammy stared at her. “Grammy? Are you okay?”
“Liesle? Do you know what today is?”
“Its your birthday, of course.” Liesle shrugged casually.
Grammy smiled. “That’s not all it is. It’s the seventy year anniversary of the beginning of Reichskristallnacht.”
“Reichskritsallnacht?” Liesle asked, trying to remember what she had learned in history class.
“The Night of Shattered Glass. The fourty-eight hours that millions of Jews were killed, arrested, and sent to Concentration Camps.”
“How do you remember that today is the…anniversary of that day?” Liesle asked skeptically.
“Because…” Grammy sighed. “That was the day, he was taken from me.” Grammy’s blue eyes suddenly became shiny with tears.
“Who Grammy?” Liesle asked, and when Grammy didn’t reply she asked, “How old were you?”
“I was twenty-five, and expecting a child.”
“What…what happened exactly?”
“Well, you’d have to go back to the year 1935, October 11th 1933 to be exact. The day my father became a Nazi solider.”
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I was turning twenty the next month, and had finally gotten a small apartment above a bakery. I was not married, but I had decided that I wanted to go to college in my hometown Berlin. My family didn’t live too far away, so I visited them frequently. On October 11th my mother invited me to dinner, telling me that my father had a surprise for the family.
I remember walking to my parents home at precisely five-thirty and being greeted by my fifteen year old sister, Gretel. Gretel was like her usual self. She was bouncy, clingy, and extremely talkative. Her blond hair was always in a mess from running and showing off how fast she was to the boys in our small neighborhood.
My house smelled like flowers, since my mother loved them so. On every table, empty shelf, or desk, there was a vase of flowers. I liked to think of my mother as a flower herself. She always smelled of Cornflowers, and she looked like one. Her wavy blond hair always was up in a bun and her deep blue eyes were like the petals of the Cornflower. She always dressed in bright colors and wore the same perfect pearls around her neck.
Dinner was served at six-o-clock. That was the first time I saw my father in his uniform. His blond hair was combed over to the side, and his blue eyes shone with pride at our pure Aryan family. We were perfect in his eyes, and according to him, we were also perfect in the Führer’s, Adolf Hitler’s eyes.
“Why do we care what he thinks?” the words were out of my mouth before I could stop them. That was when I finally noticed the red band bearing the Nazi insignia around his arm. I looked up to my father’s face. I shook my head and looked down as he bit his lip.
Gretel and mother looked at me, and even with my head bowed I knew that they could see the redness forming on my skin.
“We care about what he thinks of us Katarinna, because he is a great leader. We, were born to protect this country. He will lead us to victory!” I looked up to see my father glowing as he spoke every word.
“But what if he’s wrong?” I whispered, but no one seemed to hear me.
“We are perfect in his eyes! We are pure Aryans, the superior race! Conquerors of victory!” I couldn’t believe what he was saying. I saw how the Jews were treated. The Fürhere had them labeled with Stars of David, as if they were cattle on a cattle farm. Their businesses were beginning to be boycotted. Graffiti everywhere read: “Don’t buy from the Jews”, “We are struggling because of the Jews”, “You pay more to Jews and get less”. The list was endless, and it was everywhere. Many Jewish businesses were being taken over by Germans. And slowly, Jews were no longer allowed to go to school, teach, be medical doctors, or any civil service jobs.
My teacher at the university, Mr. Maxton, had been fired only a week before my father became a Nazi solider. He had always stuck out, like, well like a Jew in a German crowd. His dark hair and dark eyes pointed out that he was different, we were superior to him, or at least that was what I was told. I hadn’t figured out why he had been fired until one of my classmates told me, it was because of his belief and race.
“You…you support the ways they are treating the Jews?” I asked my father as he sipped his wine.
“Katarinna, we are superior to them. And we are treating them how they deserve to be treated.”
“How they deserve to be treated?” I yelled, standing up and slamming my fists onto the table. “They are people! Mr. Maxton was a smart, eligible person making a living! And you took it all away from him!”
“Do not raise your voice at me!” My father shouted. “You are still my daughter young lady!”
“I will always be your daughter, but I have my own home now. I don’t have to follow your rules anymore,” I clarified. I stepped out away from the table and headed to the door. “I’m going out for a walk,” I mumbled. I opened the door and stepped into the fresh autumn air, for the first time in my life, happy to be away from my home.
I walked down the sidewalk a small, cool wind tousling my blond hair. I hated my hair at that moment. It was what made me “superior” but I didn’t feel superior. I felt as if I had been born into a pack of wolves. A pack of blind, selfish wolves.
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