This story is really good! I would try to think of something to nitpick about but everyone's pretty much summed it up already! Although I do want to know where her book and clothes went. Perhaps explain what the other convicts think of her bringing the book and clothes giving you a reason for why they knicked them?
Other than that tiny little detail, a very unique and solid plot!
Keep writing!
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