Prologue: To "Wolf's Graceful Heart"
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Prologue to Wolf's Graceful Heart as of: Saturday, November 5th, 2011-
Deep within the darkness beyond the living, there lays a man on his knees. His elbows dug deep into the cement, his claw-like fingernails digging deep into his skull. Numb from the pain, he feels his heavy breath being forced out of his body. Streams of tears falling from the corner of his eyes, vast visions fly through his mind, and in horror he sees what may come to past. Out from the shadows comes a woman of true beauty. Walking to the tortured man, she attempts to calm him with her soft and loving voice. "What troubles you into this horridness, dear Rein?" Watching as the blood drips from Rein's face she notices the blood reaching his goatee as he tilts his head down to allow the blood and his black onyx hair to fall. "You lied to me Lilluth--" With widened eyes Rein begins to breathe deeper and heavier than before. Looking up at the beautiful Lilluth he watches as she moves her gorgeous snow white hair to the right shoulder. Even more worried than before Lilluth abruptly tries to explain to him, "I never lied to you--I only thought it was better if you were not troubled with such things." Staring deep into her eyes, Rein can see the shame of her actions inside of them. "Rein we are in between worlds, this is not the best time for this--" being cut off by Rein, he snaps towards her with much ferocity. "You're job was to protect her and get the girl to him!" With much sorrow Lilluth turns away from Rein only to try and think over her next thought carefully. "What will you have me do then?" Replying in a soft whisper she closes her eyes through flustered feelings. Finally, Rein rises from his fetal position of pain; he looks at her with cold dead eyes. "We must get them together before this new future can be molded into their reality. This vision must not see the light of day." Waiting for a reply from her, he backs off and falls back into his previous position. Lilluth feeling defeated, she too backs off returning to where she originally entered from, "Then, I will start a search for her." Evaporating out of the empty void in which Rein is being held; once alone, he closes his eyes only to endure the same horrific visions again. With his Gnawed teeth piercing his lower lip as his eyes show him the horrific visions, he back tracks to the beginning of the vision:
From the dark night walks a figure, around him is nothing but cracked earth, dead trees and death all around him. His hair running down to his feet, as we walks he cannot help but step on the remains of the villagers he had slain just an hour ago. Looking up he stares at the crimson moon up in the sky, remembering who he is; remembering the monster he was always meant to be. Looking around he sees the bloody corpses of human and wolves, his short pointed wolven ears twitch and his thick long tail wagging in delight over all the gore and death around him. With a smile, he shows his blooded teeth feeling drips of blood falling down his chin. Far from his reach, packs of wolves and a squad of crusade men band together to face him. Lunging towards the figure, with either their claws or long swords drawn, they charge after him. Unable to see the gruesome face of their opponent, he chuckles out of humor. Only a couple of feet away, all the men and wolves stop in their tracks. The figure draws out his claws and hunches over sprinting, slicing and cutting his way through the retaliators. With fresh blood spewing all over the war zone, and covered in their blood, the figure couldn't help but to laugh even more. From the distance in the corner of his eye, the figure can see the outline of a wounded girl. Turning towards her position, he strolls over towards her, looking left and right to see if any had survived the slaughter. Once face to face with the young priestess, the figure smirks,
"You have no more value to me now Priestess." Through aggression, half a war tone and half a growl, he spits fresh blood from his recent kill on her cheek.
"You will never leave this world with this kind of satisfaction, because of your crimes against nature--Beast." Spitting her words back at the figure with as much disdain that she could ever have for another person.
"Do you really think I care for any of your petty insults witch?!" with the same tone as before, he Punches the priestess, driving it into her left cheek.
"I will not let you harm anyone else--Blass--you will die with or without me--"Unable to talk from loss of breath, the priestess turns her eyes away from Blass to her dead sisters at her side. "Liana--Elli--Please forgive me--" tears rolling down her eyes, Blass readies one last blow to her head. "Renah, I plan for this to knock your head clean off." Blass smirks at his comment against her as he readies his punch.
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