Please read the prologue of my book and see what you think
The guards rushed down the wide corridor and formed a shield wall.The monsters stumbled round the corridor to face the guards.The Chieftan bellowed a command and the first wave of monsters ran at them.The guards stood firm and the monsters were repulsed.They retreated leving several of their number
sprawled on the ground.They quickly regrouped and came at the guards again.This time the monsters turned lucky and hacked down many of the guards before being driven off again.Kelda looked around desperately,where in the name of the gods were the wizard lords?What were they doing?He grabbed Arak by his mail shirt and pulled him close to him,"Go tell the wizard lords to hurry up and get out of here then flee yourself!"Arak scurried off,"Charge!"Kelda bellowed.The guards surged forward and threw themselves onto their unsespecting enemies.By the time the monsters relised what was happening half of them were sprawled on the floor.To the guards dismay a fresh group of monsters had rounded the corner,and were running towards the guards.Kelda sprinted forward the men following him.The two forces met and the battle broke into smaller skirmishes.Although the guards were skilled fighters sheer weight of numbers prevailed and the guards were picked off one by one.Kelda slew one of his enemies and looked behind him the last thing he saw was one of the monsters axes swingwing towards him it caught his ribs and he fell to the ground before his vision went black....
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