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Azila >> thank-you so much! That really helped, and I'll make the changes right away. =)
Fall_Into_The_Sky >> thanks! I'll fix those things ASAP.
Yes! And guess what? This was a featured work! *happiness*
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She came her every morning to practice,
Guinevere relaxed as she saw who it was: Lyla, a stable girl. They had known each other since they were very young; Guinevere was Lyla's foster sister. "It's fine, don't worry about it," she said wearily, her alarm fading.
She reached into her quiver and nocked
"Today, I went early to the stables to care for the injured horse, and --"
. Lyla stared back at her through solemn hazel eyes ringed by dark, curling lashes.
Until then, be warned that it will begin to deteriorate if the Syloren is mentioned or performed.
Hmmm... Didn't you already mention that she had fair, orangey hair? I don't think that would normally go with dark lashes.
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