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volleyball13 wrote:Seventy-five years ago, a little girl lived in a house by the river. When she was five she was given a golden locket in the shape of a heart. She loved it and wore every day until she died, which sadly was not long after she obtained it. This little girls name was Cynthia. She was the little girl that loved everyone and everything, including life
volleyball13 wrote:One day Cynthia went out to play in the yard like every day, and she was wearing the locket.
volleyball13 wrote:This day was different, when her mother called out for her to come inside there was no response. This made her mother instantly worry because, no matter what, Cynthia would always respond
volleyball13 wrote:Once Cynthia’s parents could semi-control their tears, they started looking for Cynthia’s gold heart-shaped locket
wore every day until she died, which sadly was not long after she obtained it.
When the parents arrived, they saw their daughter floating in the water. Panicing, the father attempts to resuscicate the dead body, but without avail. After semi-controlling their morbid tears, they notice the locket is missing. They search the area, but nothing. The locket that their daughter had adored so much was gone, until now.
Cynthia’s father turned the body over in disbelief. His baby girl was the center of his world, so he panicked and attempted to resuscitate her. Cynthia’s mother gently put a hand on his shoulder as if telling him that Cynthia was dead and there was nothing they could do.
I'm not sure if that really explains what I mean. I'm not sure how to, but do you see how their is more emotion?Cynthia's father turned the body over in disbelief - hands trembling. The center of his world, his baby girl, dead? She couldn't be. He frantically tried to resuscitate her unable to accept how cold and stiff her body was. Tears streaming down her face Cynthia's mother gently put a hand on his shoulder; it was the only way she could tell him that there was no hope because of the lump in her throat.
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