Two Different Worlds *CHAPTER 1 AND 2*

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*CHAPTER 1*

Its midnight and pitchblack, and yet again I can't sleep because of the stupid dog next door barking.
He barks non-stop but yet my mum sleeps right through it, it's amazing how her brown permed hair must mute her hearing. I laughed at the thought of that.
I threw my covers off and walked to the light, I turned it on for at least a minute then turned it back off and jumped back into to bed. I have glow in the dark stars, so the light kinda charges them in a way so they glow.
The stars always put me to sleep in the worst of times.

I stared at the roof for what felt like an hour, but which was only minutes, and I started to drift away into unconsciousness and into my dream land. I saw an amazing blue sky in my dream and the greenest grass covered hills, I ran around in love with the bright and florescent colours. As I ran around, staring at the grass squishing through my toes, I colided with a brick wall type object, I pretty much rebounded off it and fell to the ground. As I landed on the grass I felt the hard thing digging into my back.

I looked back around to see what I had hit, and to add more beauty to my eyes, I was shocked to see it was a teenaged girl just like me. But prettier of course, I have plain blonde hair and dull brown eyes, I assumed I was nothing special. But this girl, she was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. She had elegant black hair, gorgeous aqua eyes and light tanned skin. I stared at her in shock as she smiled at me. I got to my feet and helped her up.

"Im so, soo sorry I didn't mean to smack into you like that", I told her in a worried voice, and I was worried if she was hurt or not, even though she still continued to smile.
"It's alright, I'm not hurt, but I am a little shocked to see you in my dream", she replied in a confused voice.
"Wait, your in my dream?", I was now confused as well, how could I be in her dream?
"Oh well, lets just imbrace that we now have company in our dreams, Im Emelia, and you are?"
"I'm Sophie, Sophie-Rose but Sophie's just fine", I smiled back at her.
We ran off around the hills and played for hours, just dancing and playing games.

Then all of a sudden the amazing dream world started to become blurry and distant, Emelia wasnt in my sight anymore, and everything went black.
Then I woke up.

*CHAPTER 2*

I woke up with a big smile on my face, I haven't had a dream like that in years. My smile quickly faded as I heard the door slam, it was mum. She only slams the door like that when she's late.
I looked at the alarm clock dissapointed that the dream was over, the time was 8:26!
"Shit!" I yelled and jumped out of my bed, I rushed frantically around my room looking for clothes. I quickly did my makeup, threw my bag on my back and ran out the door. I ran as fast as I could to school, I just made it as the bell rang.

I rushed to my class puffed out, the teacher rolled her eyes at me and nodded her head towards my desk. The class laughed at my lateness, I quickly found my seat next to Willow and she greeted me with a smile.
"Were have you been, I was waiting for you at the front gate?", she whispered quietly.
"Shut up your going to get us in trouble", I wispered back.
She rolled her eyes annoyed at me, I turned around and smiled at my boyfriend Brad, he has the most cutest eyes with his brown curly hair. When I met him I just couldn't resist making him mine .He winked at me. I giggled and turned back around with a big smile on my face, Willow suddenly look depressed. I gave her a big hug and her face appeared with a smile. I don't what about me did that to her but I never bothered asking questions.

Class finished quickly, as did the rest of the day. I waited at the gate for Brad and Willow, I saw Willow and waved, she quickly smiled and made her way over. Then I saw Brad and I rushed over and kissed him, he kissed me back passionatly. Willow was grumpy again, I don't know why, but once again I didnt ask her.
We walked along the pathway the three of us, Brad and I hand in hand and Willow listening to her Ipod.
At the park we all seperated into our three different ways, I hugged Willow goodbye and kissed Brad.

I rushed home wanting to sleep again so I could see Emelia. I unlocked the door and went straight to my room, I threw my bag on the floor and jumped into bed. As soon as I was about to fall asleep I heard my mobile chime, it was Willow.
"Hey Willmzie"
"If your going to give me a nickname atleast just call me Will", she giggled in response.
"Willmzie's a awesome name, deal with it biatch", I laughed histerically.
She sighed and started speaking again,
"Can you come over to my house, I need to talk to you in person?", she said with a eager voice.
"Umm okay, I guess, I'll leave a message for mum and I'll be over in five okay?"
"Okay awesome", she sounded relieved.
I wrote mum a note and left.

I started walking on my way to Will's house. I was kicking rocks along the way, little pebbles flying everywere.
I was right it only took me five minutes to reach her house.
I knocked on Willow's door, she answered it quickly. She told me to follow to her room, I did as she said.
Then she told me to sit, I also follwed that instruction as well.
"I have something to tell you, I don't know how you will react though, but bear with me okay?", she said kind of scared.
"Okay?", I replied confused.
"I think it would be better if I showed you" she whispered.
All of a sudden I was expecting her to have like a second body part of some sort, but then I saw her leaning over to my face, I didn't back away. I was interested to see what she was getting at.
Her lips lightly touched mine, I kind of enjoyed it. But I suddenly thought of Brad, but then she became more eager with her kissing then Brad dissapeared from my brain.
I put my hand on the side of her neck and ran my fingers through her hair, she grabbed my hips and pulled me forward.
A rush went through my body, I wanted her more and more as we kissed, I slid my hands up her waist. She was soo small and smooth, we fell back onto the bed, slowly Will made her hands slide up my body then she undid my bra . I told her to stop. It was too over whelming just to do this at once. I think she understood as she sat a distance away from me.
"Do you understand now?", she said relieved.
All the times when I've been with Brad, and Willow became depressed, I now understood. But I couldn't just dump Brad I loved him. I think she saw the worried look on my face, she told me to go home and think about things. I walked home a little stunned.

When I walked through my house door, I saw mum on the couch. She didn't look pleased.
"What the hell is this shit?", she was holding the letter I left her.
"Willow wanted me to come over for a bit, she wanted to talk", I saw images of her and I, flashing through my head.
"And you couldnt just talk to her on the phone, don't ever do this again Sophie-Rose. Go to your room"
I didn't mind that instruction, I really just wanted to go to my room, to dream again anyway.

I lay in my bed again, looking at the stars. I started to drift once again.
Last edited by SohpieeRose on Sun Oct 24, 2010 11:17 pm, edited 3 times in total.




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Hmmm... interesting! So, basically, they interact with each other in their dreams? That's a pretty neat idea!

One thing that I might do is describe exactly how Sophie and Emelia get along withe each other, and maybe how they play games. Right now, Emelia seems to be less of a real person and more of a dream, so you'll definitely want to spruce that up. :)

Keep it going! :D
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Hi Teneall xD I'm here to review your story!
So far, I love it. The description is great, I can actually get a feel of the way the character's dream was. There was a few grammar mistakes though.

"Im so, soo sorry I didn't mean to smack into you like that", I told her in a worried voice, and I was worried if she was hurt or not, even though she still continued to smile.

It should be I'm and so, so

"Wait, your in my dream?", I was now confused as well, how could I be in her dream?

It should be you're and after the talking you should maybe write I said, my voice filled with confusion. etc etc.

"Oh well, lets just imbrace that we now have company in our dreams, Im Emelia, and you are?"

Embrace and I'm

Emelia wasnt in my sight anymore, and everything went black.

Wasn't


Other than those few mistakes, it's really nice. I actually am very shocked how well you are. I really want to read more!!


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Lovely idea. I like it very much.
Interaction in dreams would be awesome... would it not? ;)
The only thing i have bad is that you seemed rushed, take some time ot explain appearances and settings.

Anyway, keep writing.
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