Sorry for how long it took, it's been pretty busy the past couple days. I know, this is VERY unrealistic, but this is the first story I have ever completed so I don't expect it to be good.
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Chapter 3
It was black, completely black. I could barely make out the conversation happening before me “…..kill….”
“…didn’t….to…”
“…great…”
“Well…..go……bye”
I heard footsteps getting quieter and quieter. Then I felt a crash on my stomach, that’s what got knocked me back into consciousness. I sat up with Suki on my lap. She fluttered her eyes open. She sat up rather quickly “J-Jin? What’s going on? What happened?” She looked at me with those scared, yet caring, eyes. I just looked at her with disbelief. “Jin? What’s wrong?”.
“Suki, I can’t believe you would do this”
“Do what?” She was getting worried
I touched the back of my head and showed her the blood “You helped someone try to kill me”
“Jin! I would never try and kill you! I swear! Please believe me, I would never hurt you”
“S-Suki… wait, what’s the last thing you remember?”
“Um… let’s see… I remember, Mina missing… then a feeling of terror came over me… and…” She looked at me, even more frightened. “Then nothing. I just remember waking up in your lap”
I hugged her “I’m sorry for blaming you. It’s just that James and Mina both- wait, Mina?!” I looked around. Her body was gone.
“Jin, what’s wrong? Didn’t we already get past the fact that Mina is missing?”
“But… I remember you knocking her out… and those kids… they stopped singing… and… ugh…” I put my hand on my head “My head hurts”
“Jin, are you OK?”
“Yea… I think-” A feeling of terror came over me. Then, nothing. Just darkness.
I awoke in the hallway. I was sitting towards the wall and Suki, well, Suki was standing in front of me, with an ax to my throat. “Jin, I-I can’t believe you would do this to me” A tear slid down her face.
“S-Suki, what are you talking about?” I said with terror and sadness.
“You know what you did!” She screamed with tears in her eyes.
I started to cry a little bit “Please, Suki. I don’t know what happened. All I remember is you in my lap and-”
“Shut up! I’ve had enough of your lies!”
“Suki please, don’t do this!”
“I-I’m sorry Jin…” She brought the axe back, preparing to strike.
“Please Suki, I-I love you”
“W-what?” She froze and the ax fell out of her hand “J-Jin.”
“Suki, I-”
“N-no. No, this must be a dream.” She started to back up, slowly “First you try to kill me, now you say you love me?” She slid down the wall into a sitting position “This can’t be happening”
“Suki, I don’t remember trying to kill you. Please believe me”
More tears came out of her eyes “Jin, you don’t know how happy it makes me to hear you say that. She slowly made her way toward me “The truth is, I love you too”
I was overcome with happiness. All of the problems disappeared. For a moment, at least, I was truly happy.
She jumped on to me and kissed me. We kissed passionately. “Suki”
“What is it, love?”
“We should go back to the basement to see if the others are alright, dear”
“Good idea, honey” We smiled at each other before heading off to the basement. We got there quicker than expected, it may have been because I was thinking of Suki so much. We walked up to the door and knocked. “Tom? Matt? You in there?” I called out. The door slid open a bit. “Thanks, I-”
“Is Mina with you?” Tom asked, holding the door
I replied “Well, something went wrong with Mina and-”
“Wait here for a second” I could hear tears filling up in his eyes, it made me kind of nervous. I heard footsteps and then what sounded like a box opening. I heard the clank of metal coming from inside the room, and the footsteps got louder.
He yanked open the door and jumped at me with his ax in the air. Time seamed to freeze. He is going to kill me I thought.
It could be a bit unrealistic sometimes (The story is moving to fast) but it is still a great story! I would love for you to continue writing chapters, I would follow this.
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