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Prince Of Persia Epilogue (Part I)



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Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:25 pm
AnnaMamaLama says...



This is just a little story I wrote. It's set in the aftermath of the Prince of Persia storyline (PS3 Game) and I hope you like it.
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I believe everything happens for a reason. People change so you learn to let go, things go wrong so you can appreciate when they're right, you believe less and less until you eventually learn to trust no-one but yourself and sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.
  





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Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:23 am
In_the_Moonlight says...



Anna, this story is very good so far. However there seems to be 50 pages!! I couldn't finish it!! Not because it's boring or anything but i have to leave in 40 minutes for family stuff and this was unexpectedly very long. :D

P.S. I will try and give you a full review later on

P.P.S. I advise that ya try and do at least 2 reviews yourself missy. :D

**Mo**
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Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:05 pm
AnnaMamaLama says...



Yeah, I know it's quite long, but I'll be honest with you, that's just half of it. I wrote another one thats about fifty pages long, so I'll post that up some other time. A review would be appreciated greatly, and yes, I'll do some myself ;)

Thanks anyways :D
I believe everything happens for a reason. People change so you learn to let go, things go wrong so you can appreciate when they're right, you believe less and less until you eventually learn to trust no-one but yourself and sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.
  








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