This is kinda based on X-Men... I'm just adding some mutants that could possibly be in X-Men but just not featured. Reminder: I am not a very good writer. Keep that in mind. And I'm open to any suggestions.
All right, this is an edited version. If you think my beginning is still cliched, please let me know. And any suggestions for a different beginning would be appreciated. Also, i changed the title to Mutants. And this is chapter one.
The bell rang, releasing everybody from their classes. Shouts of “see ya tomorrow, man,” “I’ll see you at Wild Waves,” and “Have fun!” reached my ears as I walked outside. I found my bus, 12D and went up the stairs. I managed to get a seat near the back of the bus. I was one of the last people to get off the bus so I preferred to sit in the back or as close as possible. I chatted with my friends for a while, but as they got off one by one, I had nothing left to do but read. After about 15 minutes, we finally reached my street.
I got off at the bus stop and walked to my house. As I approached it, I got my first glimpse of it and our golden retriever, Jackie, running out of the house. She leaped up at me, knocking me down onto the slightly damp grass and just missing Mom's precious chrysanthemums. “Hey! How are you, Jackie?” I said, smiling, while she vigorously licked my face. “OK, OK, enough face washing. Dad remember to take you out for a walk today?”
She barked, and danced around me as I walked to the front door. As I opened the door, I yelled, “Dad! Did you remember to take Jackie for a walk?”
“Your mom did. I was too busy today,” he yelled back.
I rolled my eyes and walked into the living room, dropped my backpack on the floor and flopped down onto the couch, petting Jackie for a while. My mom, Angela, looked into the living room and said, “Alex, I’m taking Jackie to the v-e-t now. It’s time for her routine check up.”
“Alright. No prob. And you do know that Jackie still understands the word vet even if you spelled it.” She gave a small whine at the mention of the vet. I looked down at Jackie and said, “Go on, it’s OK. The vet’ll try not to hurt you. Go with Mom.”
After they left, I turned the TV on and switched channels for a few minutes. Nothing good on. All kiddie programs or just stuffy adult things. The only thing on right now was the news. I sighed, turned the TV off, then leaned back on the couch and closed my eyes.
My eyes snapped open, hearing people yelling in the house. I sat up and recognizing the voices as my parents. I yelled back, “Why are you yelling? Can’t anybody get sleep in this house?”
But when I spoke, the neighbor’s dog barked loudly at the same time. Loud enough to cover up my voice. I tried speaking. And yet again, the dog barked. I turned around, hearing my dad shouting at me from behind the couch. I leaped off the couch when I saw he was holding a broom and thrusting it at me. I finally realized that he was saying, “How did that dog get in here? Get out of this house! Scat!”
His voice seemed a lot louder than normal and when I looked around, I couldn’t see any dog. That confused me. Sure, the neighbor's dog was barking his head off but there was no dog IN the house.
I jumped with surprise because all of sudden, my dad was in front of me, whacking me with a wicker broom, screaming his head off and becoming livid.
I backed up quickly, trying to get to the back door. But at that instant, my mom blocked my way with a chair. I twisted around and dove under the chair. As I ran past a ceiling-to-floor mirror in the hallway, I saw myself as a beagle.
No time to ponder that, seeing my dad was ready to whack me with the broom again, so I ran full tilt towards the door and reached out to grab the knob. But I found that I couldn't.
Wait a minute. I skidded to a full stop in front of it. I noticed that the dog door was about the same level as I was. My mind flashed back to the fleeting image I had seen in the mirror. I tentatively put my hand—no, paw—on the flap and pushed. It moved.
I risked a glance over my shoulder and saw my parents staring at me, dumbstruck. I wondered why they were looking confused then I realized that most dogs wouldn’t hesitate to go through the door. I yelped and jumped through the flap as my dad dived at me with an angry shout, waving the broom.
I rushed into the backyard and looped around through the side yard to the front. I paused and turned around.
I took one sad glance at my house, which I had lived in since I was two years old, with the ivy growing up the back, the royal blue trim, midnight purple siding, the peeling white paint on the fence, the gnarled apple tree, chrysanthemums in the front garden, and a burn mark on the grass where a disastrous BBQ had occurred. I turned and loped towards Central Park with a broken heart, believing I would never be able to go back home.
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