Soul Eater

When I was five years old, living in North Carolina, I was stolen.
Stolen from my family. Stolen from my friends. Stolen from my life.
I was damned to hell by the monster we call Satan. The kid I used to be is no more, it’s been 11 years since that day, and now, I am a monster. I may look human but inside me runs cold blood, my eyes change from the brightest of blues to the darkest of reds. I am the monster that takes those who are evil down from earth to hell.
But Satan is on the move again. He is going to find a new monster and I have to stop him before he finds that poor kid and turns him into a Soul-Eater.


Its not finished but i want to know what you think before carrying on.

Well there's not much to go on, seeing as it's so short, but it seems interesting enough. I can't really tell how good it will be, or if it will be worth continuing. But the worst thing that can happen is you do it, it sucks and you move on right? If you do decide to continue it, feel free to pm me, and I'll review it for you .

Hiya!

I like this idea. This really isn't a beginning of a story, it's kind of like something you'd see on the back of a book. The summary. It invites me, though, if that was what you were going for. It really does seem interesting, and I would like to read it!

Go for it!

Classy