This was an interesting story. I always love a good virus/apocalypse story. Through I couldn't find really any problems with it, I'm only a newbie to reviewing.
This story will have alot of depth in the way you write and you write well. I don't want to rush the story or any thing but what exactly is the virus?. I mean obviously it kills but that's all we know. So I would put more charistics in the virus itself like how it kills or what causes it.
I hope this will be some help to you.
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