Young Writers Society

cool, and i say that after reading much stephen king. i like the dark feeling of the piece

Wow! This is amazing! I know it's older, but it just sucked me in! Very interesting concept, and quite original as always Snoink!

~Yoyo

Deliciously Creepy!
In a weird, erotic, moral breakdown of society kind of way
In the beginning of the story I thought that when you tried to show the breakdown of the ethics of society in a kind of...sarcastic?(not sure if thats the word I wanted to use) way you actually ended up making it too comical. However by the end of the story I felt that the problem was rectified and that I had premature judgment on my part

All I can say about this is 'wow'. This was really well written and left you with a weird, creepy feeling. I really liked it even though it was a bit perverse at parts. But that added to the affect of the story, making it better.

This is also a really original story, and I didn't expect the death parlor to do what it does (even though the name kind of implies it).

Great job. I loved it.