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A doll in contrast



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Sun Aug 27, 2006 4:52 am
serenityinthesky says...



My mom helped me with this pic since she is a photographer. But I wanted some feedback....do you think the concept is interesting or too far out? Ignore all the stupid paperwork in the background please! haha!


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Sun Aug 27, 2006 5:01 am
Snoink says...



The concept is really interesting, no worries there. ;)
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Sun Aug 27, 2006 12:39 pm
Cassandra says...



It's definitely interesting, and pretty creative as well. Nice work. :D
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Mon Aug 28, 2006 12:02 am
electricbluemonkey says...



Yeah, although how its rotated sort of annoys me.

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Mon Aug 28, 2006 12:22 am
David Guinness says...



Yeah, I would open it in an image manipulation program and rotate a few degrees.

Pretty good concept. A little creepy, though, in my opinion.
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Sat Sep 02, 2006 2:10 am
Karma says...



David Guinness wrote:Pretty good concept. A little creepy, though, in my opinion.

my thoughts exactly
I mean, it's a good picture and all... but it scares me
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Sat Sep 02, 2006 3:39 am
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Yeah, but the creep factor is what makes it work so well! I mean, the contrasting colors and everything make it THAT much more creepier and better. :)
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Sat Sep 02, 2006 4:20 am
Sponson Light says...



The composition is a good solid A.
However, the photo isnt exactly "the best quality". Which makes it that much harder to enjoy a piece like this.

I like the doll. How is it creepy?

Want creepy? Take those small china dolls whose heads are the size of their body with these huge glass eyes with a bazillion eye lashes and that creepy smile and button nose.

Holy snap those are horrible.
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Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:30 am
Sohini says...



oooo cool idea and yes creepy.

i think you could put more scribbles as the background, it'll do the pic good
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Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:30 am
Shine says...



Indeed creative and interesting,and may be a bit creepy.

Sohini says:i think you could put more scribbles as the background, it'll do the pic good


Hah!Well said. :)
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Thu Sep 14, 2006 7:03 am
Fireweed says...



Cool! Very original, and the black and red contrast is really striking. It is slightly creepy, though I'm not sure exactly why...
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