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Fri Aug 18, 2006 4:09 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34895220/ , yea did this a while ago.

i am probably going to upload a few more pictures this weekend.
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Fri Aug 18, 2006 4:39 am
Sponson Light says...



For constructive critisism on the eyes, the eye has many folds and wrinkles, bags under the eyes and eyelids. You dont want to forget them, as they make the eyes realistic.

Also, eye lashes, lots of fine strokes, for a male they shouldnt be too apparent.

I like the hat. What kinda hat is it called again? I keep wanting to say baguette. But thats definently not it.

Nice job, youre getting there. Theres more to fix but focus on the eyes for now.
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Fri Aug 18, 2006 10:24 pm
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Thanks, eye's always take a while to get right. oh, and It's called a Beret.
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Sat Aug 19, 2006 6:26 pm
Shine says...



hey I saw this painting of yours before,did u post it somewhere before?

the hat is preety cool,also the shading is fine.

You need to work on the eyes though.
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Sat Sep 02, 2006 5:41 pm
Jennafina says...



I can't see it... Could you post it here?
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Wed Sep 06, 2006 3:48 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



Sorry, im not so good with computers (more like idiot but whatever).
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Wed Sep 06, 2006 5:25 am
Wiggy says...



Nice!
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Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:24 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



thanks here is something else i did

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/39434109/
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Fri Sep 08, 2006 1:21 am
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Link the picture with photoshop, or if the picture stretches the website, thumbnail it.
Then link the deviant art, as that bugger takes a while to load, and may usually stop people from clicking at all.
So, whole picture -> thumbnail -> link.

Nice proportions, the neck is just the right size and the arms seem fine (length wise).

Nickpick? Smudgey smudgey smudgey, the only way smudgey can pass off is if its charcoal, wait, never mind. Dont smudge.
Use smooth shading with the pencil, cross hatching... stippling if youre insane (j/k).

So yeah, no smudge, its inconsistant and blurs/weakens the lines.

Choose a light source, the picture could be stronger, but because of the lack of a strong light source, it lacks depth. If we had light coming in one or two places, it could provide a strong depiction of depth. Remember, dark is not bad.

Keep at it, I like it.
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Fri Sep 08, 2006 3:28 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



thx, i don't have photoshop and im not exactaly sure how to thumbnail link everything and stuf (i suck w/ everything on the computer).

I'll have to remember that about the smudging (i do that on a llot of pictures. Haven't really learned cross hatching (or i don't know if im doing it or not). links would be nice, or if you could just explain it (here or pm)
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Mon Sep 11, 2006 5:28 am
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Any suggestions for something new to draw (not too complicated and something within reason). I cant think of anything.
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Mon Sep 11, 2006 11:58 pm
Teeeeo. says...



Draw a penguin.

I don't know why, maybe just cuz I wanna see what a penguin would look like with the style you're developing.

Besides, penguins are easy, good practice, I think :P
  





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Tue Sep 12, 2006 12:11 am
Sponson Light says...



Poses, explore poses, you dont even have to draw the body or the head, just sketch the skeletal stick frame (in proportion, of course) in many different poses.

Exotic, happy, sad, remember, body langague says it all.
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Wed Jan 10, 2007 7:16 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



My scanner is working!
1. old picture of i think me or something
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Wed Jan 10, 2007 7:24 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



number two cause i cant attach two files for some reason

I got some new pencils just doodling, and testing them out. Did a bat wing bones sketch thing to figure out proportions and shape and such.
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