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Thu Apr 20, 2006 12:18 am
Sponson Light says...



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Areida says...



*blinks*

My first thought was that the troll had three broccolis on his back. My second thought was that he looked like he ought to be breast-feeding.

Other than that, I like the blue colour and the little potbelly, but the face reminds me more of one of those demons from Fantasia than of a troll.
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Thu Apr 20, 2006 9:17 am
Myth says...



I've not seen a blue troll before but this is great. The legs look a tiny bit short compared to his arms and the broccolis are weird.
  





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Thu Apr 20, 2006 10:24 am
zell says...



thats a great peice of art youv'e got there i think there mushrooms instead of broccoli
my i just say that why is it blue a bit odd but hey it looks good anyway so meh to me
  





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Thu Apr 20, 2006 3:45 pm
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The way he's holding his club is awkward...Keeping it straight like that would take alot of effort, lol. He probably should have had it touching the ground with his arm just supporting it, that way he's not exerting himself so much.
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Thu Apr 20, 2006 8:12 pm
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Right, the reason the club is there is so I dont need to draw teh penis.
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Thu Apr 20, 2006 9:23 pm
Ego says...



...oh. Well then, jolly good show mate.
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Sun Aug 20, 2006 11:19 pm
Cameron says...



Amazing stuff...the only thing I can suggest is removing that green thing on his back. Other than that I'm speechless.
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Sun Aug 20, 2006 11:34 pm
Rei says...



Pretty good. I've never seen a blue troll either. Are those mushrooms on his back?
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Sun Aug 20, 2006 11:49 pm
Griffinkeeper says...



I appreciate the fact that the club is in that position.
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Mon Aug 21, 2006 12:25 am
David Guinness says...



I second that, Griffinkeeper. :D

The shading of this is really good.
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Mon Aug 21, 2006 12:35 am
electricbluemonkey says...



The shading is delicious.

And the 'shrooms/moss on his back shouldn't be taken out. That (and his yellow fingernails) just show, in more detail, that he's dirty.

And thanks for the club position. You spared many sleepless nights.
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