Young Writers Society

My character for VOID is named Ancelin d'Endroit. She's a futuristic knight from France. More at eleven.

Design Sheet:


Win Pose:


Lose Pose:


Intro Comic:



And a random pic of her for an art jam (the picture was based off of the theme "Too Much"):


Bio:
Name: Ancelin d'Endroit
Age: 18
Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 127 lbs.
Nationality: French
Weapons: When armed, she mainly uses her electric lance. At all other times, she usually just uses martial arts or whatever weaponable items are at hand.
Armor: Full body suit (various pieces can be equipped individually as well), plasma shield (reflects energy attacks and blocks regular attacks--treat as a light aluminum shield, except that it tears rather than denting).

Personality:
Outgoing, erratic, and enthusiastic. She is easy to get along with when she's in a good mood, but becomes unreasonable when annoyed or PO'd to the point of breaking. She's full of energy, and is an entertaining friend or ally, but can be exhausting to friend and foe alike.

Story:
Born in France, fluent in English as well as French (in fact, she speaks English better than French!), Ancelin was raised by a Knight father who was one of the top jousters in France. She used to carry his weapons around for him and help him put on his armor, and he'd show her his techniques in his spare time. Although Ancelin had trouble at first, she trained in all of her spare time (excluding shopping with her girlfriends) and eventually developed enough skills to put up a challenge even for her father. She eventually developed fair skills with many futuristic melee weapons and pretty good accuracy with a blaster.

Ancelin came to VOID to attend VCU, where she is currently a freshman studying general courses but looking into fashion design or business.

The last random pic needs pants

I like them though, I like this entire idea. She's a pretty neat character.
Keep drawing Bobo *huggles* *Has never huggled an artist*

--Elizabeth

Perfect as usual Bobo I admire anyone that can be artistic it's somthing i'm not I can't wait ot see more.

You spelt "dangerous" wrong in the cartoon ...

I love the drawings though, especially the last one.

I like the coloring + background

my gripe?
There are a few anatomical issues, such as the head looks really flat at times, like its too egg shaped. You need to "bulge" the back area. Well not need but yeah.

I like the lips too.

I love your style. It's kinda what I'm going for in my art too! I'm still in the practising stages though. One comment though, in the first picture, her arms are a bit short. That's probably something you could just look over though. Otherwise, I love the one where she has egg on her face! Awesome!

WHOA?!

Last picture, look at her red wrist band.
Does that say cock?

Indeed. Cock Rockers to be precise. It's a gang on VOID made up of comical characters.

She can rock my... box... of inspiration.

*stares* this puts my stick figures to shame.

So.. I'm not sure about the whole world thing.. is VOID an RPG type thing? I was looking at the site a bit.. either way, have more maybe? Oh..you know what would be cool? A YWS cartoon. eh, that was random, I know. Keep it up, Bobo.

Good work, Bobski--your coloring astounds me, my friend.

Her armor rocks.

*laughs at herself* yeah, that sounds pretty random and such, but it does. I think I want it.

ALL GOOD EXCEPT FOR THE FIRST PIC, HER LEGS LOOKS DISPROPORTIONATE THERE..

Thanks Torpid, but please stop shouting. That's bad internet etiquette.

5'8" and 127 lbs? *grumbles* I hate people who are both taller and lighter than I am, lol.

Anyway, this is pretty awesome. There should be an accent over the e in "tres" though.

Oh, and Torpid? Watch the caps, please.

Bobo, these are awesome. I agree - your coloring rocks.