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I drew these a month or two ago but would like to know how I can improve.. so if anyone can help..(?)



^ I think the (main) problem with this is that the tree is too big compared to the girl.



^ Treescape. Prob best one I've done.



^ Coloured version of above.

Please help if you can. I really don't draw that often so I can't always tell where I've gone wrong...

Oooh, neat! I don't think the tree is too big, although it depends on what kind of tree it is. I would think that it's actually too small, but then again trees are all sizes. As for the girl, it might help to look up some basic anatomy sources. The most recommended one is Loomis, but it seems to be gone now, so I don't have anything left for you, unfortunately. But Google is your friend!

Also, your coloring is sweet. It's very simple, yet very serene and supple for this picture. I like it.

wow (even though you showed me a thousand times) but its still good by the way where did the girl go (confuzeled)

Wow. It reminds me of those illustrated children's books. Makes me feel kind of nostalgic.

Great drawings! For the first one the girl is the only problem (in my eyes), she just seems like an abandoned rag doll.

I love the second and third one.

the girls kinda mars the beauty of the tree
but the second and third ones are gorgeous
you have a talent for colouring

They are better than any trees I've drawn
In the first one, yeah the tree looks way wide and the girl looks way tall, might want to work on that.
The third one is magical. I liked them
Better than my trees *gets jealous*

Your an artist! I really like it!