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Sat Mar 11, 2006 9:17 pm
yoha_ahoy says...



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An apple I drew from a picture. Hehe.
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Sat Mar 11, 2006 10:26 pm
-KayJuran- says...



Wow, I really like the shading on this. You did it on the computer right?
  





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Sat Mar 11, 2006 10:50 pm
hekategirl says...



Wow, I like it. It looks a little too blurry though. But if thats what you wanted, forget me :)
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Sun Mar 12, 2006 1:52 am
Bobo says...



Looks clear enough to me, unless you're talking about the background, which doesn't really look like anything. I also like your shading, but some smoother edges on the apple couldn't hurt. Adding a background that actually ties in with the apple would probably make it even better.
  





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Sun Mar 12, 2006 11:23 am
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Myth says...



This is great *is tempted by the apple*, I love your shading and I agree with Bobo about the background.
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