Young Writers Society

She sat there, defeated, staring at her dead, crushed body.
"Dammit God, I wasn't ready for this fast ball."
She sat there for hours, just staring and wondering. She had been hit by a truck a few miles out of town, someone had to notice her. The truck driver had just drove away, leaving her in agony for the next eight minutes, until she passed out and died. Those eight minutes seemed like eternity.
These damn wings were big and clumsy, she wasn't used to them. She felt someone near her, and she looked around and saw nobody. Looking at her body, the ambulance came and was already carting it away.

Care to explain this in more detail Sponson?

No, not really, it was just some random babbling I put down.

If you think there's a story for it, there isnt. But Ill make one up now.

Ill edit the first post.

cool wings, they just look a tad bit huge...

i like wings drawn like that, im just not really good at it. i need to work on them *goes off to doodle*

Thank you sponson, for this drawing, for some reason gave me a good deal of inspirations, im off to draw and write, thanks again.

Wings are huge. also that hand looks like a reptilen claw.

Of course the wings are huge, the human bone's are solid.
The wings would need to be huge to even lift off for a while.

That's really... Simple, but, I somehow like it. I espeically like how you emphasized the eight mintues...

It's true; I would daresay that those wings are going to be rather small to lift a human very well...

I said it once and I'll say it again I love your art style. Do you have a tablet pc or something?
Because it looks so crisp and clean. Either that or you used photo shop to clean it up. I need to learn how to use photoshop.

Or I used flash MX

Hmmm......that too.