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Mon Jan 30, 2006 3:15 am
Sponson Light says...



Forced myself to make this in Flash Mx.

HAPPY NEW YEAR!
(Chinese New Year, Jan 29th)

Hey a rarity! Its even COLORED!
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Mon Jan 30, 2006 4:51 am
Bobo says...



Sweet job, man. My only objection is that your drawing and shading looks rather sketchy. There are a lot of loose lines floating around, and some of your shading just looks like scribbles of random color. Her fingers look weird, too.
  





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Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:23 am
Emma says...



Bobo, I think the sketchyness is his style. Yeah, the only thng I'm complaining about is that hand that's doing that peace sign thing. I would of made the fingers go to a point at the end like what you done with your other hand... but that's just me... x]
  





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Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:34 am
Bobo says...



It may be his style, but as far as I've seen it's not the style that any professional uses. I could be wrong, but the sketchiness makes it busier and harder on the eyes.
  





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Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:08 pm
Sponson Light says...



Yeah, sketchiness is not the style that professionals use.
I agree whole heartedly with bobo.

Her fingers (peace sign) looks weird because the hand is a bit too small, and the 2 fingers go to a single point instead of 2.

The shading is just random scribbles, though placed at the right spots. Well I hope its the right spot.
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Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:58 pm
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This was for a Super Villian Contest,

I made the lamest one.

I call him Oh Kanada, he'll beat the snot out of you with his hockey stick.

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Mon Jan 30, 2006 8:22 pm
Bobo says...



LOL, you definitely have some interesting ideas floating around, Sponson. What's that on his left arm?
  





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Mon Jan 30, 2006 9:09 pm
Sponson Light says...



A shield.
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Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:12 pm
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



and its the canadian symbol a marajuanna leaf.....


jk

interesting ideas, good drawings..
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Dargquon Ql'deleodna: (n) "Dar-qu-on Kel-del-ode-na" something i made up that sounded cool, partially based off of the Drow Drizzt Do'Urden's name style
  





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Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:44 pm
timjim77 says...



Bobo wrote:It may be his style, but as far as I've seen it's not the style that any professional uses.


F*** professionals. I thought it was awesome.
  





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Fri Feb 03, 2006 6:16 pm
black templar says...



pretty cool but the only thing is the sketchiness, otherwise its right on! 8)
  





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Fri Feb 03, 2006 6:21 pm
*Twilight* says...



Well I assume the sketchiness is there because it is a sketch.......
I like the guy with the hockey stick thats funny.
What contest did you enter anyway?
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Sat Feb 04, 2006 12:01 am
Sponson Light says...



One in another forum.
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You unlock this door with the key of imagination. Beyond it is another dimension: a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. You’re moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You’ve just crossed over into… the Twilight Zone.
— Rod Serling