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Thu Jan 26, 2006 11:42 pm
Ego says...



Carmina (for those of you who remember her) actually drew this. She brought it to me for inking, and that's exactly what I did. Here's the result of that.

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Thu Jan 26, 2006 11:48 pm
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



dude, this is awsome, you need to post more of your drawings, you are pretty good at it.
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 12:11 am
Bobo says...



He didn't draw that, so I guess the technical term would be that he needs to show more of his inkings.

And by pretty, Dargquon obviously means kick-a**!
  





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Fri Jan 27, 2006 1:33 am
Sponson Light says...



Well since you basically just did the image over with ink, and the picture isnt actually drawn by you, we cant really give any critisism.

So I have to ask, what kinda pen did you use?
Your lines are so crisp!
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 2:08 am
Areida says...



That's really, really cool. I miss seeing Carmina around; her writing was always so great. Kudos to her for the drawing and to you for the inking. Nice work.
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 3:10 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



thanks for translating for me bobo, and i figured something out her right ear is smaller than her left ear, the ear lobes are different sizes.
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 7:41 am
Emma says...



I loved the way she wrote, really I did. Anyway... you did a really good job on the inking! I love how you done the hair!
  





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Fri Jan 27, 2006 6:19 pm
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What a team! I shall see you both tonight at the O.H. The people are definately the best part of any place. I'd probably be excited to go to hell as long as awesome people like you were there!
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 6:23 pm
Elizabeth says...



That is really pretty... Hmm... wow...
I remember Carmina, I loved her stories... and now I love her drawing.
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Fri Feb 03, 2006 8:29 pm
*Twilight* says...



Great inking job! I would also like to know what kind of pen you used. I've been practicing inking here lately.
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Fri Feb 03, 2006 10:53 pm
Duskglimmer says...



Whoa... my gosh those eyes are gorgeous... *wonders why she has such a thing for anime eyes*

And the inking is very well done. Very nice. *smiles and gives Phoenix a lollipop/kudos*
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Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:43 pm
-KayJuran- says...



i like the shading on the hair a lot! :)
  





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Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:00 pm
Alice says...



Wow, that's really impressive wheither urs or not. I suggest u add some color to it, color usually gives some more character to the drawing. she's half smiling, how full are her lips? her hairs curly, is it really that black? and her eyes, people can tell more than anything about people through their eyes, the color gives some history, the shape helps decide race. other than a lack of color it was good, wheither urs or not
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Sat Feb 17, 2007 9:53 am
Sohini says...



good work!!
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