Young Writers Society

My take on Fontroy's original Manga Demon

Holy crap! That is really neat!!!

Awesome job!!

Stance is unreasonable,horns are crooked,and tail is too thick. Also pants are freaky. Otherwise... Your just trying to how fontoy up. I like fontoy's better. Thats just me though

Surfergirl wrote:Stance is unreasonable,horns are crooked,and tail is too thick. Also pant are freaky. Otherwise... Your just trying to how fontoy up. I like fontoy's better. Thats just me though

The horns are just fine to me. The tail is only a little bit thick, and the pant? You mean pants? They're fine. I'd say your only problem is your feet. Sufergirl, he isn't try to show fontroy up, he just liked the picture and wanted to try it out himself. Please don't say things like that. Love you all! XD

Thanks Emma. People who say stuff like that annoy me, not because of what they say, but because they have no BASIS for what they say. If you had been involved in a certain conversdation Fontroy and I had, my dear surfergirl, your tone might be different.

The pants are so undetailed compared to the rest of the body.

Also if the orb thing is giving off extreme light, as shown by the wrist's dark shading, wouldnt the fingers have an extreme dark at the top?

I mean his stance is off balance; he would totally fall down. Emma is right about the feet too. What I meant about the pants sponser clarified somewhat. I realize your probably just trying to help fontoy but I still like his better. I am entitled to my opinion if you post, no need to get all righteous simply because i find your work mediocre. You expected everyone to compliment but compliments help nothing but egos. The tail still remains too thick and the horns slightly crooked.

the horns arent crooked.
Its the face thats off set.

^he is probibly right

Surfer, the reason his pose is off balance is because he's levitating--if you'd looked at fontroy's original picture you'd realize that *rolls eyes* He doesn't need balance if he's floating magically.

Thanks, Sponson. I'll see what I can do when I redraft it.

Surfergirl, you're rather foolish. 1) I'm not trying to show Fontroy up. 2) I'm not even trying to help him. 3) I really don't care what you think of it, Emma and Fontroy wanted to see it. 4) I don't need to prove my drawing skill to anyone, nor do I care if there's someone better than me or likes Fontroy's beeter, because it's all about opinion, and, in my opinion, you're a fool.

mmkay punkin?

Dono - don't flame. Surfergirl, stop causing trouble.

I'm loving his name badge. Nice touch. The tail and horns are fine, and so are the trousers. I personally see no need for change.

Surfergirl wrote:Stance is unreasonable,horns are crooked,and tail is too thick. Also pants are freaky. Otherwise... Your just trying to how fontoy up. I like fontoy's better. Thats just me though

So if someone drew a human, then I drew one "better", I guess Im showing them up then huh.

Wow, thats fancy! I LIKE seeing two different artist's spin on the same theme. They're both unique .

I think you should ink the badge, it looks light and is hard to read, but is a really cool toutch.

wow, this is really cool, and i agree with sponson the pants are a little uderdetailed compared to everything else, but really good job over all.