Young Writers Society

Okay, these are a bunch of random things! They are numbered for easy critiquing!

These are some girls. I'm not that good at drawing guys in the anime style yet.
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2.

3. This one is a girl too.. Or... is it? ( I should make a poll )

4.



InuYasha fan art.

5. A bunch of faces doodles. I was too bored to finish anything. Quick draw! You should try it.


6. This one I drew with my left hand, apart from the moulth. But I was allowed to erase with my right hand, and thats why you can tell who it is. He is so pretty when he's dead! Sorry..... lol.


7. Kikyo.


8. InuYasha. My best, I think. It took a while.


9. Sesh. Are his stripes wrong?


10 and 11. CHI!!! And Chi and Hideki. Something is wrong.. She's not.. Cute enough....




12. And finaly, Hana-san! From Furuba.


What do you all think?

I liked all of them especially number..8! Way better then me!

Thanks, Yoshi!

Those are awesome. Yeah all the stuff you draw is awesome. I like the one with a long nose
and glasses but I'm too lazy to go and see what number it is.
anyway those are amazing. And with your wrong hand?!?!? Jeesh.
Hey! You blew your cover!!

Thanks, BD!!!

Any critiques, anybody?

these rock!!! i can tell you have really been practicing, guess all that tracing really paid off!!

6,7,8,9, and 10 are my faves. he looks very tranquil in 6, 7 is purty, she looks wistful, 8 is WICKED AWESOME, no crap it took you awhile!!! i like 9 cuz he's in warpaint, i like the little crescent on his forehead. 10 looks plenty cute to me!!! but then again, i dont read manga so i wouldnt know...

theyre all quite incredible, though,and its cool that you do original ones and not only recognizable characters. i think youve got the style down!! congrats!!! and heres some holiday spirit: mas_wink: mas_happy: mas_cool: mas_evil: :dreidel: :menorah: :frosty:

Hell that was a lotta pictures....
I liked them all though... they looked good... as far as I could tell... but the screen is too bright, I could only see the colored in ones and the one of Inuyasha and Sesshormru... or whatever.... nice job, pretty.

First and foremost, those are kickass drawings!
Nice work.It's easy to tell that you know what you're doing.
Personally, I think that 8 and 10 are the two best.

Wow! These are all so very good! You are really cool at drawing anime! Something I can't do... you are totally better than me anyway! I would say the only problem is that you need to harden your lines. Apart from that... wow.

*shrugs
I don't like animi, i know i spelled it wrong.

Anime as said by Zelithon, "Anime takes no talent, and no practice. It should not be considered art,"
But Zelithon is really mean and exaggerates a lot (the truth)

I think they are pretty cool but the first two, I wouldn't say they were good. The features on their faces aren't positioned right.

On the one drawing where you said she wasn't cute enough, I think that no way in Hell that an anime drawing can be cute, but that's just me. I do think she's a good drawing, though

13. Guess who this is!



14. This is Kagome. I'm confused. I want to add on but I don't know where to put the arms.




Zel: Thank you for your wonderful critique. Its insight and depth have completely revolutionized the way I draw.
Cows: Are all of them no good, or just the first two? And the next time you're around anime, look at one of the anime kittens and tell me its not cute. LOL, I'm just kidding. Thanks for coming back.
RG: Thanks! And thanks for the holiday spirit.
Emma: OH NO YOU DON'T! You rock!!! Don't say that!
TBR: Thanks, sorry you can't see.
TSA: Thanks alot! Glad you think so.

i didn't quite like the first few.
the ones during the end; 7,8,9 were really good.
the Quick sketch was proffessional looking-well done!
left hand drawing was cool.

i'm not much of an Inuyasha fan-more of a Pokemon and Cardcaptor Sakura type!!!

I liked all of them, but i like anime so make sense.
Il ike number 8 too well done