You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
Sure it is! Sure it is. Like Grandma's Cookies in Grandpa's pants.
Orks have this weapon called a Zzap Gun, its pretty nifty considering 1/3rd of the time its killing your own crew.
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
It looks much too messy, and the lighting effects seem... too solid. It should have more opacity, I would think. I think you need to look at explosion for a better idea about how explosions should look. Even lightning looks less jagged.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
When you scribble your shading, it makes it look really sloppy, Sponson. Go with individual strokes and it'll look much more crisp. Pretty nifty other than that--the smoldering corpse is a nice touch.
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