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Sun Oct 02, 2005 6:04 pm
soccerfreak2516 says...



I can't color anything for my life...so I'm just putting up some of my black and white drawings for now

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That one goes with my story...

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Also for my story
which someone has asked to look at. You can read it at http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1796446

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Did this one in 7th grade, and thought it was decent if not good

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Both of those were for something I was doing for my church

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Yet another school project, this one's from 7th grade

So...what do you guys think?

Might post a few others later...depends on whether I'll have enough time to fix them in the near future

edit: wow...most of those are huge...gonna have to fix the sizes of them[/url]
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Sun Oct 02, 2005 6:58 pm
timjim77 says...



Love it. you have an eye for design and pattern. Reminds e a little of Navajo weaving. The pointillism is great too. Probably the best example I've seen of it not in a museum. EXCELLENT.
  





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Sun Oct 02, 2005 7:36 pm
Bobo says...



Wow, those are sweet! Although how the heck are you supposed to hold that sword? lol
  





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Sun Oct 02, 2005 9:45 pm
electricbluemonkey says...



Who cares how you hold it, its awesome!

Those are mind-blowing. Awesomely good.
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Sun Oct 02, 2005 10:08 pm
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yeah...the sword's from my story, and is magical, and the wrist guard-thing (i'm sure there's probably some actual name for it, but I don't know what it is) adjusts according to who uses it... for a reason that takes too long to explain, unless you read the story. That and the fact that I accidentally made it too small anyway, and don't want to mess it up by erasing it and attempting to draw it again...

For whoever mentioned the designs, yeah...I like drawing those because it's one of the few things I can draw pretty well ...that and the fact that I've always liked Celtic designs and stuff like that...so I add a lot of them to my drawings.
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:11 am
Areida says...



Oh wow... those are great. I love your shading varieties.

I have to say... your avvie made me laugh... I think I need to steal that one. :wink:
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:19 am
Jennafina says...



Wow, you are good!!! My favorites are the ones you did do in seventh grade.
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:25 am
Dreamgirl says...



The sword one is SO AWESOME! I LOVE IT! Your really good! Keep it up! :D
  





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Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:36 am
soccerfreak2516 says...



Thanks for the comments!!

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the one eye is kinda messed up, and there's a random line in the middle of it...but aside from that, I like this one

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This is from when I was at camp sometime last year...only explanation is that i was bored and couldn't think of anything to draw...but I think it turned out pretty cool...even though it suddenly decided to be really blurry...sigh

...this is gonna be the last one for a few days... my schedule for this week is insanely busy
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 1:09 am
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The second one is so pretty!
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 1:09 am
electricbluemonkey says...



The wolf/dog seems too unproportioned, it barely even looks like one.

But the other drawing is really good. Good detail.
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 1:42 am
antigone says...



I love all the pictures! Especially the one wear the squigles turn into birds. Great job.
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 1:48 am
J. Haux says...



They're very good. I think you could make more contrast of lights and darks. Also, the only reason the dog looks disproportionate is the one eye. but other than that, I like your style!
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 9:01 pm
timjim77 says...



The last one you posted, the designs, is the best one by far. It is excellent. I want a copy. Haha!
  





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Mon Oct 03, 2005 9:26 pm
Yrael says...



The second one is a very interesting and aesthetically pleasing drawing. While not resembling anything in particular, it is something that catches and entertains the eye. Good job.

The wolf is extremely well-drawn too.
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