I've never posted a picture before, so I'm just posting something I doodled on the front of a folder for my English class. What do you think?
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Our happiness here is all vain glory,
This false world is but transitory,
The flesh is weak, the Fiend is slee
Timor mortis conturbat me.
--William Dunbar
The sun thing is interesting. It has a slight mehendi design to it. And the colour is just about righ too (As in this yellow ochre with black gives it a look of the green of mehendi (or henna, as you might know it) I like it
Since it's just doodling, I can't critique it much. I mean we all doodle like a bunch of kids, so there's not much to say
The centre "thing" (I can't guess what they are) is quite good too. The "thing" next to it, kind of like a wave swooping upward distracts it and sort of ruins it for me.
A little extra bit: The sun thing would look good if you shade the black bits really black and outlinedthe outer spokes (and that one line that goes into the center) with 3D black pens.
Keep Doodling!
~Lava
~ Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know. - Ian McEwan in Atonement
Hi there! This is really artistic. I really enjoyed.
The sun is very cool and that stuff in the middle that I don't know what it is is really cool too.
It looks like abstract painting.
Really nice, it a same that it's in your english folder, not in a paint or a paper...
Thanks, both of you! I didn't really mean for it to come out as big as it did. I didn't think it would actually.
I'll try that thing with the sun, lavabubblingout, too. Thanks again. ^_^
-kittykat
Our happiness here is all vain glory,
This false world is but transitory,
The flesh is weak, the Fiend is slee
Timor mortis conturbat me.
--William Dunbar
I like it 
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