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when I did this sketch I cloud not help but think it would be so cool to make a story of a couple of different breads of horses and make a good story his one would be a pony and would be the fun one of the bunch. I have not come up with a name but it is still a fun idea

critiquing is all ways welcome

Hey!

This is sooo adorable! The little laughing pony! I like how you made his forlock so shaggy you can't even see his eyes. Is he like a shetland or something?

But he has no teeth! Poor little guy! That's all I really found bad about this. He has no teeth. Your shading is wonderful! I love this picture (gold star for you!)

Good job!

Meadow

Hai!
I really like this picture! The pony/horse has so much character! So happy-looking! The only things I would fix up are:
One : Maybe some teeth? I am not sure if it already has teeth or not . . . so never mind me if it already does.
and Two : The nostril on the right looks a bit messed up . . . sorry . . . I am not sue how you could fix that, though . . .
So yeah those are the only suggestions I have! I love the shading and everything, too! I shall grant you a . . . STAR!
From Katemabob

NEVERMIND! I think I see the teeth now! Yeah, yeah! I think those are teeth! Are the teeth the . . . yeah . . . anyways . . . . I see the teeth.

Katemabob wrote:NEVERMIND! I think I see the teeth now! Yeah, yeah! I think those are teeth! Are the teeth the . . . yeah . . . anyways . . . . I see the teeth.

XD I will work at making the teeth look like they are there and yes I do need to work on the one side of the nose thanks for pointing that out

MeadowLark wrote:Hey!

This is sooo adorable! The little laughing pony! I like how you made his forlock so shaggy you can't even see his eyes. Is he like a shetland or something?

But he has no teeth! Poor little guy! That's all I really found bad about this. He has no teeth. Your shading is wonderful! I love this picture (gold star for you!)

Good job!

Meadow

Ya sorry about not being able to see the teeth I will work on that

This is soooooo cute!
I loved the details you put into the mane! The facial expression rocks and it looks so adorable laughing like that The fact that it's hair is covering it's eyes is real cute... The only things I want to critque about is the fact that the neck seems a bit out of proportion to the rest of it and the teeth are not really noticable.
keep it up, great job!

xxmimixx

mimimac wrote:This is soooooo cute!
I loved the details you put into the mane! The facial expression rocks and it looks so adorable laughing like that The fact that it's hair is covering it's eyes is real cute... The only things I want to critque about is the fact that the neck seems a bit out of proportion to the rest of it and the teeth are not really noticable.
keep it up, great job!

xxmimixx

Thanks I see what you mean about the neck I will work on that
I will

OMG! Really good. The horse is so cute, like so kind of cartoon. I'm reminds my Lucky Luck horse. The shades are magnificent and the proportions too. I loved it! Just one thing, the hair is too much, there are no teeth and the head is a bit small.

Next time, improve those aspects and you will get an incredible drawing!

Keep going!

MORE, please!

Shauni

I have been drawing horses for years. Nothing could ever compare to this.
This is absolutelyand totally so cute!
There's not really much I can nit-pick, except he/she has no teeth.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS
GOLD STAR! Yay! *parades around*
Can we call the pony Sugarcube Dumpling?

Great job!

Shauni wrote:OMG! Really good. The horse is so cute, like so kind of cartoon. I'm reminds my Lucky Luck horse. The shades are magnificent and the proportions too. I loved it! Just one thing, the hair is too much, there are no teeth and the head is a bit small.

Next time, improve those aspects and you will get an incredible drawing!

Keep going!

MORE, please!

Shauni

Thanks I am working on the teeth and thanks for the comment about the head

LaReina wrote:I have been drawing horses for years. Nothing could ever compare to this.
This is absolutelyand totally so cute!
There's not really much I can nit-pick, except he/she has no teeth.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS
GOLD STAR! Yay! *parades around*
Can we call the pony Sugarcube Dumpling?

Great job!

lol I will definitely work on the teeth and we can call him Sugarcube Dumling that’s so cute

Hello,
This is so cute. Very great details and shading technique. I love its silly facial expression and how its hair is hiding it's eyes. The only things that really need critiquing are like what the others said, the teeth, the nose is a little scrunched on the right, and it's neck does seem a bit awkward compared to the rest of the body. But mostly this is such a great drawing! Everything else is perfect. Keep up the amazing work

-Kristen

Oh My goodness! This is the cutest thing in the world! Great...no Awesome job!

Hey Misty! I'm June!

This is so cute! He looks like he's laughing, and his hair is so cute in his face that way!

I think the neck is a bit odd, though. Like, it seems a bit... thick. I know horses/ponies do have rather thick necks, but this seems a little bit too broad.

Your shading here is perfect, dear! I love how you did it "under" the hair and around the nose. And, oh! The ears! Horse ears are just horrible things to draw They insist on jumbling up for me, haha.

Nice work, though! I really like it!

So cute; gold star!

June