Young Writers Society

Promotion for comic blah blah blah.
Its more like "I dont know what to draw, Ill just draw this"

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http://www.deviantart.com/view/22259404/

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Your drawings would become that much better if you cleaned it up.

I disagree Snoink, I always like sketchiness in pictures.

Then I guess it comes down to taste, I like sketchiness because it fills up a giant white void left over by inking.

I'm with Snoink, on this one. I would like them more if they were cleaned up. But, it is up to personal preferance.

Dont worry, I got my WACOM INTUOS3 GRAPHICS TABLET.

Now if only I knew what that was.

Oh, its that touch tablet thing, you know, instead of coloring with a mouse, you can hold the pen that comes with it, and color on a flat surface that reads the pen and puts it on the screen.

In short expect me to start inking my work and coloring.

Spiffy.

*jealous* I'm waiting to get my Wacom tablet... so expensive T.T

Well, I do like the 'sketchy look' generally, but it usually makes things look unfinished.

The hands are a little off, they don't seem refined enough, and incomplete. So added to the sketchiness, this doesn't look like a finished product. The figure on the right... her visible arm doesn't look right. I think it is the forearm... too short. Hmm... maybe not. Just looks like it, though.

Expressions are really good. I can just read the emotion ^_^

nice job.

Sponson Light wrote:Dont worry, I got my WACOM INTUOS3 GRAPHICS TABLET.

Wacom.. niiice...

Beethoven wrote:*jealous* I'm waiting to get my Wacom tablet... so expensive T.T

Well, I do like the 'sketchy look' generally, but it usually makes things look unfinished.

The hands are a little off, they don't seem refined enough, and incomplete. So added to the sketchiness, this doesn't look like a finished product. The figure on the right... her visible arm doesn't look right. I think it is the forearm... too short. Hmm... maybe not. Just looks like it, though.

Expressions are really good. I can just read the emotion ^_^

Dude, my finished things look unfinished, yeah, Ive had that compliment before.
Im gonna ink it, so yeah... stay tuned, and read the fething comic. (Advertisement whore = me)

Thats cool. Makes my wonder what the story is here. I like the second one better, even though I think most people won't.

Cool. I like the second one better cause it's easier to see, more contrast or whatever. But generally I like sketchiness in things. Nice job.