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Rayne and Tyranny Pups



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Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:57 pm
RayneChild says...



Ain't they cute? Rayne and Tyranny as puppies. OMG Rayne's markings were so hard to make with her sitting in that position! I took the poses from two 101 Dalmatians puppy toys I have sitting on top of my T.V. Haha. I think Tyranny turned out WAY better than Rayne, but, hey, that's just me ^^ They both have floppy ears :D As you very well know, Rayne is the yellow and black one and Tyranny is the grey and blue one.

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This is a pretty old picture, so Rayne's markings on her face aren't right. For the proper face markings, look at my avatar, or my Hellfire picture.
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 1:03 am
Incognito says...



Helllooo!

Very nice and adorable. It makes me want to get a puppy.

Okay and now we start. I do like how there is color. It adds more affect. I also agree with you that Tyranny is the better looking one. You did the paws great on Tyranny and the lines are clean and percise. The only thing I would have to say that oddly bugs me is that Tyranny is not level with Reine. Tyranny gives me the feeling of playfulness.

Now with Reine it is a different matter. His one ear is a bit demented but I do like the paws. The markings are indeed a bit off but what can you do about that. I think the picture would have been more effective if you hade Reines eyes open and not look like black voids.

I do not know where these characters are from but I think you did a good job replicating them.

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Wed Feb 25, 2009 7:26 pm
RayneChild says...



Yeah, I'm not entirely pleased with the way Rayne turned out. And thanks for pointing out the unlevelness - I never noticed that before! I guess it doesn't help that Rayne has black patches over her eyes to start with and then I drew her eyes closed. I've never been very good about drawing floppy ears, anyway, so thanks for pointing it out. And they're original characters, so I designed them myself :)

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Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:35 pm
VampireBloodrace says...



Lol, call me crazy, but I like how Rayne came out better! I like the smudging on the tail and her expression. Tyranny's eyes look kinda weird...and is she laughing? I can't tell :( . Anyway, good drawing! (I'm not very good at critiquing art, sorry :( :cry:
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