Young Writers Society

Ill see if Im couped up at home the next few days to continue this further.
(No its not all going to be emo)

This seriously sounds like me in some distantly strange future....
Nice job on the hands... I suck at hands....
As well as everything else.

You need to clean it up a bit, the second the most, its kind of hard to tell what your looking at with all the extra lines. but its nice drawing.

The blurry stuff is usually the stuff you dont need to look at much.

I can't really read much of it, but the drawings will be all right once you clean them up a bit.

One nitpick from the words I can read: My BF has (not had) because you're writing in present-tense.

well actually, if you think about it, the boyfriend had to have dumped her first in order to get up to the point where shes writing in the blog about her bf dumping her, so the "Bf had dumped me" was in the past in order for her to write that she was dumped.


But I dunno. I find that you cant get dumped and writing in your online blog similtaneously, unless he was dumping her at the point she was typing. Which is odd.

But this is just me.

Yes, it is in the past, but when you're writing in present-tense and refering to things that happened in the past, you use has. Had is used with you're writing in past-tense and are refering to things that happened before the time you're writing about.

Ahh I get it now

you're in the psat now...

In the first drawing though it looked like he was a giant arsed macho guy
in the one now he's lik ethis skinny little bugger!

Hmm, this should get interesting..

Reichieru wrote:Yes, it is in the past, but when you're writing in present-tense and refering to things that happened in the past, you use has. Had is used with you're writing in past-tense and are refering to things that happened before the time you're writing about.

Then you would never use had because when you write with had you cant use had because it would have had to be the time before your writing. But I just did it, which is confusing me greatly.

No, there are times when you use had. Let me give you an example if the difference.

"I'm feeling terrible because my boyfriend has dumped me."

"I was feeling terrible because my boyfriend had dumped me."

Understand now?

No...
Man, I guess this is why I suck at english, I dont understand its complex rules!
But if you insist, Ill go back and fix it.

I would say "My boyfriend dumped me" so you can get away from all that has/had confusion.

Cheers to that!