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Thu Jan 22, 2009 7:35 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



Hey These are some of the pictures me and my friend toke and edited, hope you like them.
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Thu Jan 22, 2009 7:36 pm
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Thu Jan 22, 2009 7:37 pm
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Thu Jan 22, 2009 7:54 pm
Juniper says...



Hey there Ech!


Niiiiice! These are a lot better than the first ones :D. And so pretty, too! I think my favorite would be number 3.

Also! Your features are too sharp to just do a standardized black-and-white edit, you know? You should soften it a few times-- select the face and soften it twice at least-- and then put a soft blur on the rest of the pictures. It should come out decent :D.

very Modelesque though! (yah, I think I just made that word up...)

Fabulous!

June


EDIT: The way I said that about features sounds so harshly rude XD. I'm sorry! I'm not saying your features as in what you look like, I'm saying that the eyes and nose have very contrasting surroundings. Sorry if I sounded rude :D
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Thu Jan 22, 2009 10:44 pm
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Thankyou XD, I see what you mean and thanks for the tip. I love the 3rd one too.
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 2:41 am
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I like the last one best, it shows more emotion where in the others, the two people appear a little cold. Try showing some emotion next time, sadness, or something. The first pic, they appeared a little stuck up to tell you the truth, if this and you and your friend, sorry, but it does appear that way. I like the look, the colors and how the neckless is bright, the neckline is bright and the blond girls hair is very pretty the way you did the shadows. I like the second one where she is looking away is very good to, perhaps they could both look away from the camera in another one? Cool, keep it up.
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 7:34 am
Telina says...



I really liked the last one because like Scorpia said, they show more emotion.
I admire the poses, they look really comfortable but like they could also be in a magazine.
  





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Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:23 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



Yes we are acting suck up in the first one, Great it looks that way hehe.

The blonde one is xXKazeXx and the other is me.

Thanks for the reviews.
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Just like every night has it's dawn.


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