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Wed Jan 21, 2009 7:58 pm
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Ina_in_boots says...



Let me know what you think!
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Dragon:
Made this two years ago as a sketch for my Sculpture of a dragon I was going to make.
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Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:40 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



I think it's a really good start. Add some more shading and it'll be great, hmm... advice:

Shading - add some more shading to show the bone structures, this'll make it look more three dimensional and less two dimensional.

eye - It might just be me, but the eye looks really small and stretched, isn't it meant to be a bit more spaced out, and less stretched? That could be to do with my lack of knowledge on dragons though :lol: You need to give it a light spot, and dark spot. xD



Basically, everything looks great for a sketch. Now you need to make it into a masterpiece ;) Make sure you add more shading to fix the bone structure, once done properly your picture will be great. Well done and good luck ;)

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Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:36 am
HopelesslyandIrrevocably says...



Very cool! You should add color! It's GORGEOUS! Very very good!
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Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:01 am
Antigone Cadmus says...



Gorgeous. This is really good.

To bring your drawing to the next level, add shading. Like Kirsten said, this will make your drawing look less "two-dimensional" and more "three-dimensional."

I think the drawing would look even better if you added some texture. Maybe give the dragon scales.

Hope this helped,
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