Young Writers Society

Ok, here are a couple sketches I did the past week.

He is sorta soposed to look like he is in a cave or some thing, yes I know he looks totally washed out, but scanners never make the drawings look as nice as they do in person.

This one her collar bones are really messad up and I will be working on fixing them. Also the man behind her is holding her arm and part of her sleve. I was kinda going for the louis claudia effect here, but not totally interview with a vampire based.
I got a scanner for christmas! Hurray! So you will be seeing a lot more from me soon!

Hey, Tabithalillian!

These are some really nice sketches!

Here is some critique:

First sketch:

-The eyes are too fat apart.
-The nose is too curved
-The shape of the head is very nice

Second:

This reminded me of the cover from Scott Westerfield's "Pretties". ^_^ It also reminded me of Anne Rice novels... and then I read the description! Yay! I was right!

-Claudia is younger-looking, if that's what you wanted.
-The girl's lips are much too dark.
-Maybe you could add blood dribbling down her chin! ^_^
-Again, the eyes are too far apart
-The head is too wide
-Her fingers are a bit chubby (my fingers are like sticks when I draw- you never can draw hand right, can you?)
-The neck muscles are fine, but her thick neck and wide shoulders make her look masculine.

I hope this wasn't too harsh. I really liked your sketches!

Very good job,
Sakura

I really like these. xD
The first one:-
-The shading is amazing. I adore it. xD
-The proportions are a bit wrong. Eyes are meant to be an eye-length apart.
-I think the curve of the nose goes too far up his face.
-The sun/moon is great. I love it.
-You absolutely rock at eyebrows no, seriously, they are hard to draw but yours are great, xD

The second one:-
-I really like the hair
-They eyes are too far apart again.
-The shading is good as well
-I like the shadow underneath the face. xD

Overall:
I really liked these, Sure, there were some small errors but after all, art is something you gradually improve upon, isn't it? You obviously have natural talent because these are great You are amazing at shading, I adore your shading, so much

Well done

I really do hope you post more.



~Kirsten
xoxo

eyes are an eye appart!! Now I remember! I totally can never get the eyes totally correct and they are either too far appart of on the forehead. . .erg. But thanks for reminding me, I think I may just practive drawing eyes now. THanks for the eyebrows, I spent like fifteen minutes just staring at some random guys eye brows. I see what you mean about shoulders, its am ongoing problem I have and those are actually the man's fingers, not her's. They are pretty chubby though arnt they? BUt thanks for noticing the interview with a vampire theme, and yes, I think I need to make the little girl younger. Wow, I thought my shading would be the thing that made every one thing my drawings sucked but apparently not! Thank you again! -Tabitha