Young Writers Society

This is my "Team Rocket Pk" free hand sketch. This I 'copied' from an image I found on photobucket. If anyone knows how to put two attachments on a thread, that would help me a lot and I could put the pic I copied it from on here!

I hope it's good!

Okay. This is kind of creepy. I like it when things have pupils.
The tail stops a little bluntly for me. Maybe add some more tufts to it or something.

The left part of it's hat is not connected at the brim, and it makes his ear seem sort of funny. The little "bangs" it has are a little lonely. Maybe add a couple more going to our left.

You might want to add a little more shading to it around the hat, ears, feet, etc. just to give it some depth.

I have no idea how to add more than one attachment. I think you have to use photobucket, but I'm boycotting photobucket because it hates me, so...

Good drawing!

-Sea-

Hrmm. The foots seem to be a bit off. It doesn't look as though they are connected with the body all that well (especially the right foot). The body itself doesn't seem to have that smoothness to it. Also, the red dots that are on Pk's face aren't well aligned. If you have seen Pikachu on the show, they are aligned together. Could also do with more detail + shading.

Andy.

it looks like an evil pikacu

That's pretty much the point

Haha! How cute! Punk Pikachu! I love it! One thing, though:

His tail is a little too thin, and a little too jagged. I know you probably want to make it original, but doesn't he only have like, two jagged points in his tail? And it's like, half thin and half fat, right? Yours is thin for the whole thing, and the very tip is fat. I dunno. It looks kinda weird.

Other than that, great! Very, very cute. I also like how you changed up the design on the tips of his ears. Regular Pikachu is just like, a flat line. I like how it's jagged and stuff. It looks better Great job n_n I also L.O.V.E his collar