Young Writers Society

Sadly my printer isn't working and so I had to take picture of my lovely work. Yes I just said lovely.
Anywho. I have started back up into my drawing faze but I will still be taking potos too. If you don;t understand what I mean look here. http://myfreindsavamp.deviantart.com/gallery/#_browse On page two at the very end is some old works I did just this last year though.

So.... *yay*
I'll give the first person a prize for figuring out where I got the dress from. ^-^

Hey Vamp!

Very cute picture - I like a lot of the detail you put into it. Immediately, I really liked the colors I saw , very bright and eye catching and the coloring was done well.

Some of the body structure is a bit off, though. Her chin seems a bit too far over to the right. I know this is anime, so you placed her nose in a different spot in consideration of that, but even with that in mind I still feel like the chin is not positioned correctly. Anime does have many different styles, though.

Also, her shoulders are structured a bit wrong. They're too close together, considering the position she's in, and too small. You need to give room for her shoulder blades and collar bone - perhaps, try looking at a picture in a magazine where a model is positioned similarly and try to see how her should curves and the space between her neck and the curve of her shoulder.

Still cute, in the end. Keep drawing!

~ Clo

I agree with clo the colours are really good and vibrant - draws your attention to the picture immediatly!

Clo mentioned the body issues, but I think with anime you can really get away with it - as the characters are sometimes not correct anatomically.

I love the outfit aswell - its really nice and bellowey (is that even a word? - either way it describes what I am trying to say best!!!)

Keep drawing! And don't worry I wouldn't have been able to tell the difference from scanning it to taking a picture

All the best,
Meevs
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Thanks for the advise and the praze. >.< I can't redo this one or change it becuase it was colored on the original so x.x.
Oh well. Thanks again. ^-^

You don't really need to change it - do you just draw anime? *goes to search to see if you have posted any mroe art work*

I do lots of diffrent stuff... My portfolio is up in my first post.