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flowers...retro style...?



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Mon Nov 10, 2008 6:05 pm
*singerofthenight* says...



okay.....here it is....weird i know..
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Mon Nov 10, 2008 6:17 pm
Alteran says...



Cool. I'm curious as to what medium you used. Is that paint?

I really like the texture ou gave the flowers, very expansive and offers a great focal point for the viewer. I think you could have done without the words though. Or maybe stylized them in a way that matched the picture. I think you could have made them a little more blend in-ish so they weren't so bland on top of everything.

I must suggest going over them with paint or whatever you used if possible.

Really cool though, a nice effect.
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Mon Nov 10, 2008 6:19 pm
*singerofthenight* says...



Thanks. Me and my sisters were playing around with acrilic paint, and I got bored...this is teh product of my boredom. I'm probably going to go over it, but I'm not sure yet.
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Wed Nov 12, 2008 8:46 am
miyaviloves says...



Did you use acrylics for this? you can really see the texture of the paint, tis' nice!

Only thing I would suggest really is to shade some more, maybe add something to the background? AS it is it is a little bland, but you could definalty improve it by adding some more detail :)

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