lyrics taken from the song 'family portrait' by pink
this picture was taken on my cell phone by accident feedback greatly appreciated
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"isn't it supposed to be like this? the glory of first love, and all that. it's incredible, isn't it, the difference between reading about something, seeing it in the pictures, and experiencing it?"---twilight
i love the photo, but the words dont exactly fit. The picture makes me feel invited rather than shunned. Everything about this photo is beautiful in every way, and everything is happy. Apart from the words not fitting the way they are made does, like i feel young so the writing portrays that feeling.
All is wonderful about this photo, just make the words fit
Like the above user said, this song doesn't really fit. This photo seems inviting and happy... not like Daddy's about to leave.
You should try a more upbeat song to get lyrics from. Then it will fit.
And, I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be technical or just plain mean, but I am in love with song, and the Lyrics are "I promise I'll be better" as opposed to what you wrote.
But, it's all cool. Will you tell me if you decide to do another song for this beautiful photo?
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
It's a really good idea and you should follow it up and I'm really wishing I could think this sorta schizz up but hey.
get a camera that doesn't blurr! Because thats all that's really stopping you being incredible.
But I love the writing and the way you change the words. reminds me of the author of Charlie and Lola's sort of style.
And ask your dad to look grumpy.
xxxx
I just hit my computer
Because it was being slow
I need my daily Smallville fix
And it will not load the video.
i get a lot of criticism about it...
but i like the blurryness on my pictures.
its kinda something i do,
on some of my pictures I've done it on purpose.
"isn't it supposed to be like this? the glory of first love, and all that. it's incredible, isn't it, the difference between reading about something, seeing it in the pictures, and experiencing it?"---twilight
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