Young Writers Society

Hello! I've really been non-existent on this site since i joined And while I'm working on a few pieces, I'd like to post a bit of my artwork!

I've been in Drawing and Painting classes since my freshmen year, and I really enjoy them. However, I can always use criticism to help me improve. Please tell me what you think as I post some of my pieces!





[Self Portrait]





















Well, please tell me what you think! I appreciate it

Wow!

You have a very unique style that I don't even want to mess with. I didn't see how old you are, and I suppose that doesn't matter, but I'll just say again - you are very talented.

The first two are amazing, and then this brings me to the third, which I find lacking compared to the first two. The third one lacks dimensions that the first two have, and this is due to lack of shadowing. It works so well for the prior two, and without it, the third one looks very, very flat. I think for future reference you should work with how well the style you use firstmost here works.

Amazing though. Keep drawing!

~ Clo

Lol yep. I don't know why i decided to leave out the shading of the girl's face. I was in such a hurry when I drew this, trying to get it done before contest

Thanks for your input!

I love them;
you have serious talent
I especially love the fourth, fifth and sixth ones
you rock

I personally liked both of the flowers, they are very pretty. I also liked the picture of the guy standing there in black. The only critique I have is the first drawing, The head is a little big. No offense lol
Very good paintings and drawings. Keep up the good work!

Thank you everyone! I'm glad you like them And I appreciate the crits

I really like them! Especially the first one, his face is not drawn perfectly but I thinkthat really adds to the picture, you have a lot of talent! Wish I oculd draw like this I really do!

These are all lovely - what kind of media do you prefer usuing the most?

Keep drawing!

Meevs
x

Thank you! And ya... its not perfect lol. I believe i did this one almost a year ago!


Neways, I love working with graphite and pastels *not together, though I've yet to try it*. They're definitely my favorite medias!!

Ah graphite is lovely, but I can't use it, same with pastels, I don't like the feel of them on my fingers and I squirm lol, so well done for getting used to those!!!!!

I think I need to be your friend on deviantart.

I love them! Although maybe you could add more detail in the landscape ones (not that I could do them, but still) and made the faces more, I dunno, regular.

This is what I would kill to be able to do.
xx