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Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:27 am
myfreindsavamp says...



Okay. There's going to be two posts becasue I know some of you can't go onto deviantart. So here's the front cover.
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We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:28 am
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And the back. ^_^
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“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
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Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:33 am
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Hate to break it to you but bullet is not spelled builet. It's bullet.

Cool though.
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Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:34 am
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Thnak you. I'll go fix that. :? :wink:
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Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:40 am
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Agh! I forgot the question mark now! Darn. Oh well. It's fixed on the original.
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Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:44 am
October Girl says...



I love it, it's totally cool

all my support good luck

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Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:52 am
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Thanks. I'll try my best. Already near the 20 thousand mark. *proud of self* :P
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Mon Nov 03, 2008 10:07 am
miyaviloves says...



Wow 20 thousand already! I am only at ten and I most probably never will finish! I am far too lazy!

As for your over I really like it, but I think that the front does contrast a little too much with the back - but maybe that is a theme in the story?

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Mon Nov 03, 2008 11:56 am
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Thanks. And you too! :P
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Thu Nov 06, 2008 12:39 pm
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Darn. I have to use a diffrent picture becasue my title changed. I'll have to probable change the back to but here's the front for now.
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~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
  





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Thu Nov 06, 2008 4:14 pm
ATreeah says...



awsome and awsome pic...blows my cover out of the water :D
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Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:03 pm
little.angelfire says...



I like the idea of your cover, and the title is rather catchy. However, I think maybe a little photoshop will help. Make it a little bit more interesting to draw the eye in. I know you aren't supposed to judge a book by its cover, but some people do...>.> *points to self* Ahem...um, anyway, I think adjusting the color a little will draw in the eye. Also, blurring the background could help to put a bit more emphasis on the girl.

I'm not a wiz at photoshop, with luck you are, or you know someone that is XD

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Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:01 am
myfreindsavamp says...



*thanks everyone* I owe all of you. Though I do not own my own photoshop I know how to use it pretty well... (school did it)

Here is the back. The hopefully offical one this time.
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“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
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~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
  





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Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:36 pm
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Need critique on the last page... x.x
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Thu Nov 13, 2008 7:15 pm
miyaviloves says...



Ok last page I do like but it isn't as good as the others, I think it is all that white space, looks more amateaur than the rest. Hmm...back covers are always difficult...I do love the front though with the girl its super :D

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