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The new shippo



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Fri Oct 31, 2008 6:42 pm
Maki-Chan says...



How does he look?
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Fri Oct 31, 2008 7:05 pm
playerj09 says...



Like he just had to tell someone something terrible or mean and is really sad but is trying to hide it to either look strong or to keep the other person from being too sad.


Did I even come close to what you were going for? That is just what I felt when I looked at it for a second. It is pretty good by the way.
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Fri Oct 31, 2008 7:59 pm
Maki-Chan says...



thanks ^_^ I am glad you could see his personality. Strong and caring.
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Fri Oct 31, 2008 8:14 pm
myfreindsavamp says...



He looks a lot better Maki. Love the way you draw.
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Sat Nov 01, 2008 4:55 am
Maki-Chan says...



thanks Vamp *Blush* I-I am so embarrased :oops:
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Sun Nov 02, 2008 3:44 am
Chupatoasta says...



Stupéfiant! Stupéfiant! Beaucoup mieux!
Amazing! Much better! I love it!
Especially how he looks a lot thicker and less maniquin-y...
I have no idea if that's really a word... but,
I love it to the ends of the earth!

Beaucoup fait!

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Tue Nov 04, 2008 8:18 pm
Maki-Chan says...



thanks ^_^
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Thu Nov 13, 2008 7:54 pm
miyaviloves says...



he looks really good! well done! I thin kyou just need to add a bit more shading to the hair and hes perfecto!

Keep drawing!!!

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Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:36 pm
Maki-Chan says...



ok ^_^ I created a newer and better design that is way cuter :P
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Thu Nov 13, 2008 10:07 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



yeh!!!!!!

wicked!!
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


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Thu Nov 13, 2008 11:52 pm
Maki-Chan says...



THANKS! paramore >_<
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