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ok this is my character Shippo, from my soon to be manga "Doki Doki Moon" (I just love that name).

Name: Shippo (last name still in process...maybe Hitori or Tsuki)
age: 15 or 16
gender: male
species: Elf
home planet: Aoi Tsuki (Blue Moon)...still in process
personality: He is distant, but he has a very kind heart. He is somewhat rash and likes to boast (But he is sort of nervous when he talks about himself) He tends to blush alot, but he looks for preaceful ways, but truth be told he is kind of a coawerd. (Still thinking about personality)
appearance: picture
hair- it is either a light blue, or light brown/
eyes- green
skin- it is a light tan and soft.
other- on the side(Or back) of his neck there is a tatoo. 7X2
history: Shippo was born in a lab in space. He was created by magic and science. (Still in procces of more)


What do you think would he make a good main character?

I, personally, love it.
However, if you widened from the torso to leg area it would look a lot better.
He seems to thin and flat to function, much less fight.
Also, give him a little more emotion and bend his arms a bit.
He looks like a mannequin with his arms like that.

Pip pip, cheerio, ta-ta!
Chupa

thanks ^_^ I tried a different style with him, I am going to post more different 'versions' of him. I will make sure that next time I draw him this way I will make his arms bend, and widen his torso. Thanks for the tips

umm. I am going to post an updated version of him ^_^

Poor guy looks like he hasn't eaten in a long time!
I think you've got a nice character there. I love green eyes. It's very hard for me not to let all of my characters have green eyes.

I would love to read the story.

oooh. Updated version! I'll have to go see it. I like the detailing on his sleeves.

-Sea-

yes, you'll like the new version ^_^

yes, you'll like the new version ^_^