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Mon Oct 27, 2008 5:58 pm
ATreeah says...



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Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:14 pm
Via says...



AT--

I think you are going to have to wayyy resize that there, killer. We can't see it that big.

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Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:23 pm
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Hey this is too big like Via said, I can't see it in all it's glory :(
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Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:28 pm
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crap
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Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:33 pm
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better?
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Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:41 pm
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beautiful :D much better - i couldnt see it before! :P
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Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:43 pm
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Yes thats a million times better :D Did you do this on photoshop? If you did you could blur the image sides so it dosen't look so sharp against the background?

Other than that it's great! CANT WAIT TILL NANO!

I'm gonna post my cover soon >D

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ya im not done it yet but i cant wait either :D
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Wed Oct 29, 2008 5:10 am
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Ooo...nice!
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Wed Oct 29, 2008 5:28 am
Alteran says...



I like it, my only concern is the big empty space under your name. It's just such a large negative space. I hope you have plans of filling it cause I think it will help balance your cover.
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Wed Oct 29, 2008 5:38 am
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Nice.But yeah I agree with Adam,that space really looks empty.
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Fri Oct 31, 2008 7:07 pm
myfreindsavamp says...



I got one question. WHat's nano?
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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Tue Nov 04, 2008 6:28 pm
KJ says...



Hmmm... I'm not crazy about it. Don't get me wrong - I like the feather, and the mountain-like thing... but the blue sky doesn't do it for me. I mean, anything else might be overdoing it, and having too much going on all at once... I don't know what to suggest.

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Tue Nov 04, 2008 6:40 pm
JabberHut says...



I am actually very fond of this cover. Even the empty space didn't scare me 'cause I'm so distracted with the lovely feather. However, as an idea to fill in the space due to popular vote, you could put a quote there. Whether it be a quote from your novel or a quote from a review, it would be a good spot for it. Just make the font smaller than the author's name. I wouldn't it too distracting from the feather. :wink:

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**EDIT: Jay kay, that space was bigger than I thought. :lol:
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