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Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:30 am
imaginationgurl14 says...



Another picture from my European tour. This one is of a medieval town known as Rothenburg, Germany. Comments and critiques would be completely amazing :D
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Thu Oct 23, 2008 3:38 am
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I love it! There isn't much to critique about it! I think you caught everything nicely! The picture is slightly fuzzy, but then again, it might be my screen, I'm not sure. I love the tone of the houses and the wheely thing (Ferris wheel?) in the background gives it a nice effect! I'd like to see more of your tour!
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Thu Oct 23, 2008 12:57 pm
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It's quite interesting. I like the ferris wheel in the back simply because everything up front seems kinda old and then bam, ferris wheel. A nice mixture of past and present architecture I think.

My main suggestion would be to crop the top down to the cloud line. It's such a large negative space and it really throws the picture off balance.

On a creative note, maybe gray-scale it, It might work even better as a black and white photo.
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Fri Oct 24, 2008 1:20 pm
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Hello

It looks picture perfect it just needs a bird flying though the sky but obliviously you cant do that. There is too much of the sky but i like it because of the bright blue then the cloudy bits.

Brilliant work

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Fri Oct 24, 2008 2:25 pm
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very nice. i like the contrast between the blueish sky and the red roofs of the houses. there's a lot of sky, but i didn't immediately realize it, so it's probably not a big problem. i'm curious as to what it would look like in greyscale. but it's a nice picture. good job.
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Fri Oct 24, 2008 6:31 pm
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Beautiful. I can see the differences in the colors, like the blue sky and red roofs. I also like the way it looks soft. (Hmmm sounds wierd lol)
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