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This is a picture my sister took - and she's ten. She also has taken great pictures of flowers. She catches the dewdrops on them.

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That is a very good picture for a ten year old. I am not sure if a 10 year old needs feedback, but I would say to make sure to concentrate more on the focal point of the picture (in this case the girl). This means the background should contain less and be less distracting. Also, focusing on the girl and making the background a bit blurry would be a nice effect

Yeah a good picture for a ten year old to have taken Do you have photoshop? YOu could do some pretty cool stuff with this if you do, like Jack said, blurring some bits and making the girl more focal would make it look really cool. IF not Im sure you could adjust some things on some noraml photo editors?

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Thanks, I'll tell her.

Hey there.

You aren't kidding me are you?
well, for a ten year old kid that's a very good picture, shes got a good future ahead if she pursues it.
Like the people above said she has to be able to use the focal point more carefully.
Thats about it I guess.

by the way the girl in the photographs you?

Yes, it is. Alot of the time Iam a subject. Although she can take good ones of herself. Shes really good at flowers though.

wow what a good ten year old,
I love the fact that the shadows show up as white,
very arty farty lol

That is not a ten year old!
How?!?!!? It cannot be so!
It's still a good photograph, though: the black and white is actually quite modern and the clearness of the photo is very nice
Try different angles and see if it will look more effective. Maybe taking the picture with the camera facing from the grass, so her face is looking down..

I promise she's 10. She is about to turn 11 though.