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"Paint" Lightsabres
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Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:38 pm
Firestar
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How do you like them?
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Firestar
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Admiration: Our polite recognition of another's resemblance to ourselves.
Dopeler Effect: The tendency of stupid ideas to seem smarter when they come at you rapidly.
Confidence: the feeling a person has before he fully understands the situation.
Shin: A device for finding furniture in the dark.
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Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:45 pm
Stori
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Not bad. Though, I think a blade that long would be unweildly.
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Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:58 pm
miyaviloves
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Um...well they look like light sabres, were you trying to make them different some how??
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Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:59 pm
Dynamo
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Definitely too long and thin. If you shorten them up and make them a little thicker they'll be perfect.
Chicken <-- Egg <-- Rocket Powered Fist
Take that, science!
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Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:21 pm
Firestar
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Is this better?
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Admiration: Our polite recognition of another's resemblance to ourselves.
Dopeler Effect: The tendency of stupid ideas to seem smarter when they come at you rapidly.
Confidence: the feeling a person has before he fully understands the situation.
Shin: A device for finding furniture in the dark.
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The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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