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"Paint" Lightsabres

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Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:38 pm

Firestar says...

How do you like them?

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Admiration: Our polite recognition of another's resemblance to ourselves.

Dopeler Effect: The tendency of stupid ideas to seem smarter when they come at you rapidly.

Confidence: the feeling a person has before he fully understands the situation.

Shin: A device for finding furniture in the dark.

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Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:45 pm

Stori says...

Not bad. Though, I think a blade that long would be unweildly.

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Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:58 pm

miyaviloves says...

Um...well they look like light sabres, were you trying to make them different some how??

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Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:59 pm

Dynamo says...

Definitely too long and thin. If you shorten them up and make them a little thicker they'll be perfect.

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Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:21 pm

Firestar says...

Is this better?

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Admiration: Our polite recognition of another's resemblance to ourselves.

Dopeler Effect: The tendency of stupid ideas to seem smarter when they come at you rapidly.

Confidence: the feeling a person has before he fully understands the situation.

Shin: A device for finding furniture in the dark.

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