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This was a picture I drew on the bus on the way to the agriculture expo. Each leave wasa bump on the way. Well tell me what yall think. I did onein color too, butit wasn't as good.

So.... yeah.... just wondering.... anyone there thats wants to critique it?

You draw all the leaves???

Whoa.. You must have been boored.

The picture is good , I like it.

Are there leaves crowing from the roots?

Your Avatar!! I was going to comment on it inyour profile but now I see this thread!

This is a great drawing, the sketching is kinda professional! Plus it's in my third favourite colour.... and you drew it on a bus!! (you guys have smooth roads I'm jealous of)

I like the celestial eerie feel of this drawing and it looks better in your avatar in the smaller size. I only wish you could darken the branches, they merge with the leaves now; if you could deepen their outlines, they'd look better.

Oh, believe me. The roads were far from smooth. Each leaf on the tree is a bump. haha, I had the hardest time drawing everythinf else.

ok im not an artist but i'll TRY to critique it...it could use some more colour but other than that it's CRAZY GOOD

Oh I drew it in color too. Here it is.

EKKKK! What is it? jk. It looks awesome!

thanks...

Whoa!

Well...I definitely prefer the purple one....it's...it's... its...it's....it's it's... it's... Amazing! Job well done!

I like the purple one too.

I need to draw a tree while riding in a car on your roads. I can't draw leaves for the life of me, so I always draw dead trees.

I do think that you could darken the branches a little.

The roots were also very good. They lookes so fuzzy, and they actually had little roots sprouting from them! Yea!

In color, it looked sort of like an add for an environment-friendly organization or something. In just the purple, it looked sort of mystic and magical. I thought that the stars were a nice touch.

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Thats what I thought about the purple one. It is my favorite.

Sohini wrote:Your Avatar!! I was going to comment on it inyour profile but now I see this thread!

This is a great drawing, the sketching is kinda professional! Plus it's in my third favourite colour.... and you drew it on a bus!! (you guys have smooth roads I'm jealous of)

I like the celestial eerie feel of this drawing and it looks better in your avatar in the smaller size. I only wish you could darken the branches, they merge with the leaves now; if you could deepen their outlines, they'd look better.

I agree. . .and love the signature!

That's not what I look like at all.


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I personally prefer the all-purple one. The roots are done better, as are the leaves.

lol. sorry. IT was a sureal picture, thats why I named it that.