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Mon Sep 29, 2008 6:28 pm
Maki-Chan says...



How did I do? Later on I will post a photoshop version. ^_^
this is my first time drawing him ^_^
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Tue Sep 30, 2008 8:36 am
mtempleton says...



Yay! I love Kingdom Hearts and I love Sora. Your Sora is very beautiful, if a little young looking. This drawing is quite different from the way I would work - your lines are all very clean - much more mangaesque than my work.

When you photoshop, play especially with the contrast, ok. this is too dark right now. And it seems like I'm always saying this but try to add some more variation of tone. Your work will be more dramatic if you do!

I was going to say that Sora means sky in Japanese, but you already knew that, I see.
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Tue Sep 30, 2008 5:16 pm
Maki-Chan says...



Thanks ^_^ I worked hard on this. I had never drew Sora before, but it was fun. Sure I will make sure to vary. I am going to try and color it in photoshop. Its really hard to get rid of the pencil marks. (EVIL)
But I have an awsome perfectionist as my friend and she offered to get rid of the pencil marks so I can color it :D
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Tue Sep 30, 2008 11:58 pm
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Let me just say, he could stand some different eyes. Other than that, you did a good job.
  





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Wed Oct 01, 2008 12:11 am
Maki-Chan says...



umm....does that mean you do not like them?? Just curious. I drew him manga style ^_^
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Wed Oct 01, 2008 9:52 pm
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There isn't one "manga style," you know. I just thought the eyes look kinda weird, like they're all one
color. *shrugs*
  





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Wed Oct 01, 2008 10:13 pm
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I know there are more than one style, but this one is more similar to the style from the Kingdom Hearts Manga. Have you heard of it? Its not very good, it is missing alot of importants parts.
Ok, I can understand that, next time I draw some anime eyes I'll make sure that there are differences in colors ^_^
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Wed Oct 01, 2008 10:54 pm
Stori says...



I've seen it, but never read it.
  





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Wed Oct 01, 2008 11:51 pm
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eh, your not missing much. I mean its really cute, but if you haven't heard of the game you have no idea what is happening.
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Sun Oct 26, 2008 5:49 pm
lshryock2 says...



sorry to say this is and all...
its a nice drawing but its typical.
a alot of people i know draw characters like this
i wanna see somthing new and orginal.
i hope it will be from you :D
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Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:19 pm
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oh, I will be posting some more of my art soon. Including random stuff, and character bios.
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Tue Oct 28, 2008 4:43 am
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It's a nice drawing. I'm not a big KH fan but I like it. Very good picture of him. The lines are so clean. I'm also not really into Manga (or is it anime) basically I'm a fan of those type drawings. I drew a picture of Sonic the Hedgehog that was about in that style. Wish I could find the notebook that it was in but I have so many of them it hard to keep track.
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Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:48 pm
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thanks ^_^
Oh, I wish i could of seen Sonic >_<
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Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:59 pm
POTAFan1973 says...



It really isn't that good. I mean you wouldn't know it was Sonic. It was more of doodle.
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Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:06 pm
Antigone Cadmus says...



Wow! That's really good!
You're really neat, but I do agree a little with the eye comment. They're kind of- empty. When I draw manga eyes I usually give them pupils or make them shiny-looking, but you're much better than me!
Did you scan it into the computer or what?

PS: I like his hair :D

PPS: Did you know spell check doesn't recognize anime or manga as words?
  








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