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lol these are completly different style of eyes... i personally like the first one. you can see me drawing it and how at this link ---- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R6UNxjRSHC0
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lol This reminds me of my comic book phase when I would draw pages of different styles of eyes, trying to pick out the perfect one.

The starry one is pretty, but the pupil is kind of light. It's more like your own creative style - very original, I like it. The second actually does look a little manga/anime styled... the lashes look a little fine, but other than that it looks good.
I'd watch your vids but dial-up = evilly slow. D<
Keep up the good work!

Crazy good its AWSOME !!!!!!!!!!!!

I think the first eye would have been way better without the stars in it - that just made it seem, for lack of a better word, childish.

Otherwise they're great. They both could use some darkening, color/contrast, but what you have so far is good.

Keep drawing.

I put the stars in because well... it was a doodle! i didnt plan any of it, i just jumped starit in. I put stars in my pictures so much that it has almost become my trademark, i nearly always put a few stars in on my drawings thanks for your comments!

Hiya Gracce,


Its so pretty, Im stary eyed lol,

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Those are beautiful!

The first one is pretty and... otherwordly. At least that's what I get when looking at it.

The second is my favorite, though. Pretty sexy. Kinda gives me the feeling someone's pleading to me. Don't ask why; I guess pictures really are worth a thousand words.

I have to see more of your art. These are too good.

Although the first one is very creative and original, I personally like the second one better. I like the shading and the streaks in the pupil are amazing. I have always loved eyes, and that't usually the first part of a character's appearance that I think about. Perhaps there are too many stars in the first eye. I don't know, but it seems a bit cluttered in there. But what do I know?
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Thanks, both eyes were personally my fave! the first eye was cluttered because if you actually look closely at someone elses eye (or in the mirror) you will see it is really colourful and complx, thats why i added the stars, but mostly becus it was just a doodle!

DUDE
THESE ARE CRAZYYYYY
YOUR REALLY GOOD AT DRAWING
MY FAVE IS THE STARRY EYE ONE
May i request a pic with the second eye with a body
your really good you could prob. make it

Wow. I literally said that as soon as I saw the first eye.
I really like the both. I draw eyes a lot and it's one of my favourite features to draw and in general. I live the intricacy of the Starry Eyes and the lashes of the second one.
I also liked how you did it in pen, which obviously shows your confidence in drawing these two pictures.

Try out light cross-hatching to shade the eyes now: It will bring it new depth.
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Beautiful! Well done, I really like it that you drew them in pen. My favorite one is the bottem one.
1st- is more artistic
2nd- is anime.

I really like your style good job.

Hey, nice work!

I love the second one. It's got darker lines, and the pupil looks more real because it's darker. The first one is amazing too, though.